 yuki-souma 2008-09-16 . chapter 1Awesome!
i want to read another chapter please!
PS:
I love Iori x Kyo
too much,
think that,
i'm chilean, so spanish's speaker
and i read it all
^--^
Happy for that
i want to read more from you!
see ya1 |
 Zanui 2008-07-03 . chapter 1As corny as it sounds, reading through this story was 'Worth it', haha!
I'll admit, it was out of character for the two of them (or atleast, that's how it felt to me), but it was so wonderfully written that I completely forgot about that factor for the entire duration of the fanfic.
The wording and narration were perfectly executed, and I didn't even find a single spelling mistake. Not sure if there was even one to begin with, but I didn't notice it.
Also, I absolutely adore how subtle the BL was. I'm not too much of a fan of stories that try to cake it on heavily, and make it seem like it makes no sense whatsoever. This however, made plenty sense, due to the development that lead up to it and all.
And one last thing I'd like to point out is the subject of a real life problem used for the basis of this fanfic.
It was awesome how you incorporated a serious issue into a story, and even though Kyo doesn't seem the type to get into that sort of thing, it was very much realistic. Kudos to you on such a wonderful read! |
 Camaleao 2008-06-24 . chapter 1I never really think about Iori helping Kyo and I never think abou Kyo having eating disorders, but I cant help love your fic =]
Nice writting and nice plot! (especially, nice ending! XD)
I'm waiting for a 2 chapter, with a Lemon scene! haha! *-* |