I liked it, to say the least. It was very descriptive. The conventions could improve a little, but otherwise, well done.

Strange. Why hasn't anyone reviewed this yet? Hmm...

I liked how you did your description of Jekyll and his surroundings, and how Jekyll was arguing with the mirror (Hyde), who tricked Jekyll into throwing the antidote at the mirror to shut him up.

My only gripe is that there are small places where it switches to Hyde's POV, when it should stick to Jekyll's throughout.

Cya!