 Akari-chan 2008-05-24 . chapter 2So finally I got down to review this...!
I'm so, so glad that you really like Ken. Imagine what you'd do to him if you hated him... That's... the third Ken rape fic you wrote, isn't it? Correct me if I'm wrong, but, yeah, I'm still amazed at the fact that you can keep going on making things like that plausible. Yes yes, assassins, totally not gonna get raped, but you managed to stay IC in the other ones, and this one doesn't appear to be less awesome than any other. You still get me so curious to know what will happen next...
I like how the first chapter is done entirely in the point of view of strangers. It's very unique, and all the original characters look like real persons. Everything is believable, from the reactions of the people who found him to the doctor taking care of him. I specially liked the fact that Kenken fought the doctors - he had still strenght to fight for himself and wouldn't go without a struggle. That's what I like about him~
For me, Weiss always have this surreal feel surrounding it (yeah, assassin-florists with cat names do that for you), but the begining of this fanfic felt so real it was almost scary.
I'm curious for the rest. You're made of awesome *heart* |
 shikigami-kun 2008-05-18 . chapter 2Wow, am I glad to have stopped by this fandom again. Nice fic you have going here. I love all the side characters you have developed here. They al have a personality that makes them believable. I like seeing complete worlds. :)
Ah, poor Kenken, what has happened to you? How long have you been gone? How badly have you been broken? I hope you write more soon. And I hope Youji can help him some how through this ordeal. Well done, and thanks for sharing!
~shiki-kun :D |