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| Telling Stearson 2008-08-18 ch 24, | abuseOH GOD! Please. PLEASE~! don't let Ciel intervene with this wonderful blessing blessed upon us today by the all mighty Lily. XD! I don't know . . . it would be interesting if . . . i don't know maybe Ciel joined in. Heh heh heh. Or . . . maybe. .*tens of thousand things race through my mind. Drools* Um. . . where was i? Xd No. Nevermind. OH NO! It's time for a Bart Modeling of different outfits while Bob watches. *like the scene in the new guy where "Gil" is with the bad girl in school and she is trying on clothes or was it swimsuit. C:< * |
| neko chi 2008-08-18 ch 24, anon. | abuseGreat job! go bob/bart!! keep up the good work!! ^.^ sorry for asking but umm will this turn out to be a bob/bart/cecil triangle? |
| Madam Pegasus 2008-08-16 ch 24, | abuseI bet Bart never saw that coming. Figures that Cecil would eavesdrop, but then again, that could happen to an envious brother. You know, he could just be rough with Bart, as a way of revenge, yet not show either Cecil or Bart that he cares. Make Bart his little toy. “I naturally assumed that since you were upside your blood would be traveling to the other head. Then again, Bart Simpson, you’re not one to follow rules, even if it’s the laws of physics you’re breaking!” Such a raunchy palm tree! |
| Shimito 2008-08-16 ch 24, anon. | abuseSorry ó~ò it was an accident i'm so sorry. (Reading your fanfic.)... oh god, Cecil have a cruse on bart xD please continue, it's getting better and better :D and you are such a great Writer x3 |
| anna 2008-08-16 ch 23, anon. | abuseHey I've got an idea. Why don't you have sideshow bob electrocute bart like in that episode where the entire simpson fam shocked him. hehehe thinking of ways to tourture bart is fun |
| chikoku shoujo 2008-08-13 ch 23, | abuseI love your writing! You should go professional. But I had a dream last night and since I read this right beforehand, it ties in. Ok so what if after bob falls for bart, he lets his guard down and bart escapes. However, he realizes he loves him too and he knows that if he goes home he'll be lonely and depressed so in the end he acttually goes back on his own accord and figures that there's no way bob could ever love him so he slits his wrists on the doorstep and writes a note on blood like bob did to him in the cape feare episode. But then the brothers come while he's still alive and start to take him to a hospial. I don't know if he lives because I woke up. I tried to go back to sleep because it pissed me off not knowing the ending but when I finally succeded I had a weird alice in wonderland dream that wasn't really helpful. excpt that the queen of hearts was bob and the king was bart. But anyway just thought I'd tell you my dream and see if it helps you any. Loved An Ice Heart Melts With Warmth by the way. |
| Shimito 2008-08-10 ch 23, anon. | abuse... |
| Telling Stearson 2008-08-07 ch 23, | abuseOMG~! OMG~! Bob's a perv. thanks to Bart's retardness! GOD~! how I love bart. Nothing like a nurses outfit to make you feel all *smirks* WARM inside. OMG! I feel so bad for not posting up the reviews considering that I read all of you chapters three or four times minimum. I feel like such a jerk. I still haven't watch Dark Knight. Kind of want to now reading Joker's crazy ass line. ARGH~! nothing like a dead actor to make you want to see a movie~! |
| Madam Pegasus 2008-08-04 ch 23, | abuseOoh, how deliciously evil! How we adore our crimson palm tree?! Anyway, the only problem I had with this chapter was that Cecil cussing was very out of character. Hehehe, Bart as a nurse, I wonder if he has like a girdle on or some of those medical socks or hose or something like that, I can't think of it right now. Joker did have some very good quotes, especially that madness quote. Now I can think of him without just thinking about Sparta.. |
| Gianna 2008-08-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseGod, I haven#t left a review ways too long! Shame on me, but then agian, I was on holidays :D Anyways, I'm so excited about the next chapter! Sounds like things are getting heated :3 ...do I have to feel extremely stupid for not having any idea what movie you might possibly be alluding to? Keep up your great work! |
| Madam Pegasus 2008-07-29 ch 22, | abuseMy lips are sealed, I do hope that people see it. I loved the talk of boogers, it made me think of Bart from backin the Simpsons' infancy. Thanks for the credit. |
| MochaCocaFan 2008-07-29 ch 22, | abuseCliffy! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Swisssmarie 2008-07-22 ch 21, | abuseExcellent chapter like always! Man, I love reading your stories 'cause they always have me reading them outloud! There's suspense in every chapter! I never want it to end. I also really love how you put recurring jokes from the show into your stories! They let me remember those good times from the earlier eps. It's kind of hard to explain, if you do that's great, if you don't... sorry 'bout that. =P Can't wait until the next chapter! |
| MochaCocaFan 2008-07-22 ch 21, | abuseAwesome next chapter! |
| Madam Pegasus 2008-07-22 ch 21, | abuseWow, you managed to turn a running joke such as the rakes into an actual anaylical(sp) and symbolic point. I'm very impressed. This is got to be one of the best Simpsons stories I've ever read. Bob's feet are also like rakes, because they seem to fall victim to so many things, other than being the detonator to the rakes' explosive. His feet was his undoing in "Krusty gets Busted", and "Funeral for a Fiend". Not counting the rakes in "Cape Feare", "The Italian Bob", and any others that I may have missed. It's been awhile since I'm seen some episodes with the living crimson palm tree. |