your be glad to know that you are the first story i have reviewed as a member. got sick of not being able to review good stories,as i wasn't a member. so anyway. great story, loved reading it and i also enjoyed 'when love steps in' started it today and just finished, took me a while, but both of them well worth reading.

Very good. I was really moved when Sara called Gil the first few times... * (5 stars)

That was such a lovely love story.

AKE:D

yes a real love story GSR style

AH need more, did Sara get shot, did Gil get shot, hopefuly Mark got shot, need to know...

AKE:D

Oh man I thought my cliffhangers was bad come on who got shot TELL ME PLEASE it's probably poor Sara something is always happening to her

ok we got the crime fighting duo on the way LOL

I'm not trying to be mean, just helpful. But using all bold lettering makes for difficult reading. It is hard on the eyes. You'd do better to only use it for emphasis. Otherwise, a good story.

This is good.

This Story Is Good Can't Wait To Read More! I Hope I Don't Sound Rude But I Don't Like The Song Lips Of An Angel I Guess When It Comes To Music I'm A Huge Music Snob And I Only Like What I Like

Is Cindy going to do something silly, like wreck Gil's place. And why cant Sara tell Gil where she is. Cant wait for the next chapter.

AKE:D

He needs to go to Sara, he needs to go to Sara.

Loving this story, cant wait for more.

AKE:D

Ok i'm sad. Sara needs to come back and slap Cindy.

Loving this story.

AKE:D

HOW CAN YOU DO THAT. After last nighs episode they need to be together, please, PLEASE PLEASE.

AKE:D

A very painful story