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Reviews for: Wandering Soul: Lost In Storm and Shadows
CaramelMonkey
2008-05-20 . chapter 1
dreaming about Daniel? COOLIO!
infinitespace junky
2008-05-18 . chapter 1
I'm reading this back to front. I don't suppose that will surprise you. Yeah, it would have been great to see those glimpses of Daniel, interspersed with the Jaffa shots. I liked Sal, I would have liked to seen her go back and thank him, I suppose she saved his diner from being robbed. We know Vala lived at the diner, it's a good description of how that must feel, alone, when the place is shut up, especially when she's already confused. isj.
acer-sigma
2008-05-17 . chapter 1
Nice little look into the mindset of Vala during her time at Sol's. Daniel's presence in her memories does a really nice job of showcasing his place in her life.
spacegypsy1
2008-05-17 . chapter 1
Lovely title and so appropo, the story followed nicely, great job!. B
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