Great work.. although it was short.. you could also continue as well if you wanted. But still really good .

A really sweet oneshot. I loved how it was a bad situation that brought Ray and Neela back together again. Brilliant for your first fic.

As you already now I think this is a great first attempt, keep up the writing and I'll be happy to read anything you write

As I've already told you, this is a great story!

DocRock06