Pretty good. Not great, but pretty good. Not enough bella death stories around!

(cheers) YAY! Bella died! sorry, I don't like Bella. or the Twilight series for that matter...

wonderful twoshot. loved every word, and the song was a lovely pick for it! ^-^

So heartbreaking, but so well written. Great job.

ahw... how sweet... this chapter is like romeo and juliet, when he found juliet dead he decided he can't live with out her... at least this chapter is a happily ever after...

huh? what was the cause of Bella's death? thou it was touching that her last words are "I LOVE YOU"...

Wow... that was really good. And really sad... I liked it.

Aw, this is so sad... it's very well-written and in character, though. Great job. =)

Wow, that ending was incredible. I was almost in tears when Bella and Edward saw each other again...'forever 17'. It was beautiful!

omg. this is so sad! but i love it! plz post edward's pov!

This is good, and I can't wait for the next chapters. Or the explanation of why Bella's dead.

Now you have ten reviews.

Update, dammit!

(Even though I know what's going to happen...)

this is good u have to update

this is good. =]
i wanna see edwards point of view please please please =]
i love edward =]

We need to see Edwards point of veiw. I can't believe she died i knew it would happen but still it's so weird.

Wow that was good! I can't wait to see more.