 ills 2009-10-04 . chapter 1lol aw, poor Remy. |
 paper.creations 2009-10-04 . chapter 1:D
Good lord, poor Gambit. I can picture it, with the primary coloured uniform and the visor and the name-tag...
-laughs-
Epic.
-Maggie |
 Dameon 2009-08-20 . chapter 1 This made me smile! I love how you hit Jean-Paul's personality dead on: arrogant, snobby, and intelligent. I thought that Remy and Rogue were particularly well done as well. Great writing, and I love the inner thoughts of Jean-Paul. It added another POV that really made the story for me. Great job! |
 aiRo25 2009-05-13 . chapter 1Oh my goodness! This was hilarious! Perfectly hilarious! ROTFL
I don't generally think of Remy as being dirty and stinky, but other than that, this whole piece just had me rolling. Jean Paul has such a unique perspective, if finally a bit of sympathy at the end. |
 Wiccamage 2009-04-03 . chapter 1I love your writing abilities. I can never get enough of them. I marvel at the way you master every character - from their dialect right down to the way they hold themselves.
I would have such a hard time writing JP's character, but you do it flawlessly. Even the narration, from his point of view, matches his character to perfection.
I love reading your stuff. I wish I had more internet access (coming soon!) so I could read everything.
Anyhow, have to go again...
Keep up the writing!!
Love & Light,
Wiccamage |
 Glyth 2009-03-20 . chapter 1Beautifully written and very in character. This made my day! |
 CaraM 2009-03-09 . chapter 1You couldn't at least make the boy a stripper? McDonalds is just so un-Remy! Even Popeye's would have been better! I know...that's the point, but it still sucks! Good story, definitely did not see that one coming. |
 Paradoxically 2008-09-27 . chapter 1 Superb, as always. I regret not reading this earlier--the humor is just too perfectly suited to this pairing!
-P |
 allyg1990 2008-09-05 . chapter 1Absolutely genius, as usual. Very entertaining! :) |
 Coreen Fennel 2008-08-21 . chapter 1YES, no one's mentioned it yet! I love the little SGA mention. -is very sad about it now, though- |
 Eileen Blazer 2008-07-13 . chapter 1Aw!! You are made of win for writing this, because this was ridiculously fun. Ha! Seriously.
Oh Jean Paul.
...oh Rogue and Remy.
Hee! |
 Stef 2008-07-07 . chapter 1This was hilarious. And I love your Northstar |
 Ms Arano 2008-06-09 . chapter 1Oh, this is just too funny for words... |
 Rogue14 2008-05-19 . chapter 1Hehe...so did not expect that :-D Really thought Remy was upto his old habits. Anyways, wonderful one-shot! |
 Veronica 2008-05-18 . chapter 1 This was hilarious, and absolutely perfect! Great job of keeping them in character and oh so cute, I loved it! |