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ills
2009-10-04 . chapter 1
lol aw, poor Remy.
paper.creations
2009-10-04 . chapter 1
:D

Good lord, poor Gambit. I can picture it, with the primary coloured uniform and the visor and the name-tag...

-laughs-

Epic.

-Maggie
Dameon
2009-08-20 . chapter 1
This made me smile! I love how you hit Jean-Paul's personality dead on: arrogant, snobby, and intelligent. I thought that Remy and Rogue were particularly well done as well. Great writing, and I love the inner thoughts of Jean-Paul. It added another POV that really made the story for me. Great job!
aiRo25
2009-05-13 . chapter 1
Oh my goodness! This was hilarious! Perfectly hilarious! ROTFL

I don't generally think of Remy as being dirty and stinky, but other than that, this whole piece just had me rolling. Jean Paul has such a unique perspective, if finally a bit of sympathy at the end.
Wiccamage
2009-04-03 . chapter 1
I love your writing abilities. I can never get enough of them. I marvel at the way you master every character - from their dialect right down to the way they hold themselves.

I would have such a hard time writing JP's character, but you do it flawlessly. Even the narration, from his point of view, matches his character to perfection.

I love reading your stuff. I wish I had more internet access (coming soon!) so I could read everything.

Anyhow, have to go again...

Keep up the writing!!

Love & Light,
Wiccamage
Glyth
2009-03-20 . chapter 1
Beautifully written and very in character. This made my day!
CaraM
2009-03-09 . chapter 1
You couldn't at least make the boy a stripper? McDonalds is just so un-Remy! Even Popeye's would have been better! I know...that's the point, but it still sucks! Good story, definitely did not see that one coming.
Paradoxically
2008-09-27 . chapter 1
Superb, as always. I regret not reading this earlier--the humor is just too perfectly suited to this pairing!
-P
allyg1990
2008-09-05 . chapter 1
Absolutely genius, as usual. Very entertaining! :)
Coreen Fennel
2008-08-21 . chapter 1
YES, no one's mentioned it yet! I love the little SGA mention. -is very sad about it now, though-
Eileen Blazer
2008-07-13 . chapter 1
Aw!! You are made of win for writing this, because this was ridiculously fun. Ha! Seriously.

Oh Jean Paul.

...oh Rogue and Remy.

Hee!
Stef
2008-07-07 . chapter 1
This was hilarious. And I love your Northstar
Ms Arano
2008-06-09 . chapter 1
Oh, this is just too funny for words...
Rogue14
2008-05-19 . chapter 1
Hehe...so did not expect that :-D Really thought Remy was upto his old habits. Anyways, wonderful one-shot!
Veronica
2008-05-18 . chapter 1
This was hilarious, and absolutely perfect! Great job of keeping them in character and oh so cute, I loved it!
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