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Reviews For: A Love Undaunted

Ladin
2008-08-29
ch 3,
abuseI can already not wait for the next chapter! this is really good! can't wait, Well met, Ladin
Ladin
2008-08-29
ch 1,
abusegood job
Khophey
2008-07-20
ch 2, anon.
abusehey i love your story! im actually a member i just cant log in right now cuz my computers jacked!! yay. anyway my WoW character is Astranei, a level 23 draenei shaman. she has royal blue skin and shoulder length choclate brown hair, a long blue cloak, a red and black emberstone staff, and a red and white thunderforce guild tabrd. wo!
Chanel39
2008-07-03
ch 2,
abuseOo I'm loving it. You should go check out my stories:). I have one about a night elf and a blood elf, and another with Fandral gettin' lucky. You best be writin' another chapter because I'll be waiting.
Chanel39
2008-07-03
ch 1,
abuseCute beginning. *Reads the second chapter*
Redlady26
2008-07-01
ch 2,
abuseChapter 2, well done!
The first part gives an accurate view of what it may be like to come to Darkshore for the first time and feel a bit intimidated.
I do play WoW so I know what that's like.
As for the second part, I was quite shocked! You pulled at my heartstrings, so that I felt quite sad at what happened to these people. And though you don't say what happened to them, I'm sure your getting to that.
All in all, interesting chapter.
Aquilesia
2008-05-24
ch 1,
abuseI'm liking the start! :) I especially think the dialogue is written well, it's natural, the way people would normally speak.
Looking forward to your next chapter!
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