That is so sweet and cool at the same time! Also FYI, I loved the first cjhapter of Ledgend of the Fighter's of the Veil. It is awesome. I havent seen a HSM/Buffy crossover yet. And its actually awesome. Nice choice of a song for the chapter too. It fit right in.

wow!! i really like this chapter! please please write more, it would be a shame just to leave it like this!

I have reviewed.. :) Great Story so far...

The beginning was good. I liked how Troy teased Gabriella and then they both teased each other. But there were some errors that made it hard for me to understand things at times. Also, you had good sentence structure except for not putting a capital letter at the start of some sentences. And when you want to combine the word "is" with a another word like for example: He is = He's. But for other words you want to make plural or just in present tense like for example: looks, shares, terms...and so on, you just add the "s" on to the end.

You have a GREAT potential for writing great because with a few corrections this would be really good. Just keep trying and if you need any other advice just message me, okay?

I'm sorry, I couldn't say anything about the end since I never watched Buffy or Supernatural.

Keep trying and don't give up!