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| HistugayaToshiro96 2008-08-17 ch 31,  | abuseLove it i hope Rukia doesn't try to kill her! |
| Tekaru Kite 2008-08-13 ch 30, | abusegreat story, when's the next chapter out? |
| HistugayaToshiro96 2008-08-09 ch 30, | abuseSorry i haveing been reviewing untill this chap! This is one of the best storys i've ecer read! ad i hope airi becomes a vizard thats alot better than a arccere that way she can be a normal humman XD great job! |
| david 2008-08-02 ch 30, anon. | abusei think that you have a gret story going, and you shouldn't listen to WriterofAwe, i read his story, it's not that great. please keep writing! -David |
| Wight Mamba 2008-07-17 ch 16, | abuseI thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, keep it up ;) |
| my lite side 2008-07-16 ch 27, | abusehi, ive been reading your story for quite some time now, and i have truly enjoyed it. please, keep writing. |
| Larn555 2008-07-07 ch 26, | abuseAwsome story, I think Zezuri and Grimmjow could use more romance. Please keep writing. |
| Wight Mamba 2008-06-25 ch 9, | abuseI'm getting into this story, oh and why do you begin some of your chapters with the same sentence? |
| Wight Mamba 2008-06-25 ch 6, | abusenow it's getting good! |
| Wight Mamba 2008-06-25 ch 3, | abuseIt's confusing so far, i can't understand what thae heck is going on(well some what) well anyway it's pretty good just pretty slow and bland, and i'm sorry if this is a harsh thing, i don't mean to be. |
| ashoutinthedark 2008-06-19 ch 22, | abuseHah, if you're going to keep updating this fast when I review, you might want to get to work. I can review all day long. Nice to see that Airi got the attention that she needed, though what is going to happen to three...well, two Arrancar and a Human in Soul Society is going to be interesting to watch unfold. Keep up the hard work! -ASitD |
| ashoutinthedark 2008-06-19 ch 21, | abuse/reviews Sorry I haven't done so earlier, I've been following your story for a while, and have quite enjoyed it. Keep up the hard work. |
| WriterofAwe 2008-05-21 ch 5, | abuseMe again I have more advice no offense but the last chapter was totally pointless yu didn't have to make that chapter. If you continue at the rate you are going at one minute to the other you'll NEVER finsh the story when you do a chapter you can skip any amount of time to a important part of the story you don't have to write down Airi's entire life, you ca skip a bit like in the next chapter you can go like this "A few weeks has passed and Zezuri was finally getting used to the Arranacars ways" you don't have to follow me exactly but still don't go minute to minute it becomes booring... Anyways the story improved like you said and is getting better I am really waiting for the big twist like Airi finally discovers her powers or they escape into a black hole of something plz make a twist or I'll die of boredom... (Wow this is a long Review ^|^) ~ Please whatever you do read my Bleach story in the Bleach catergory check pages 11-14 it's called "Bleach: Holaneium" and leave a review. |
| Meng-4-2 2008-05-21 ch 5, | abuse"My hand does come through the other side!" XD |
| WriterofAwe 2008-05-17 ch 1, | abuseThis I am very...very sorry to say this but no offense but is amateur If this was a book I would drop it under my desk start playing somethng on the computer and forget it forever I am not entirely sure what problem I should get on execept that you didn't portray all the characters right some of them you did but others not so much and it's very boring where's the action? Now that I've read your's please return the favor and read my story at: /secure/live_preview.php?storyid=4233187&chapter=1 |