I've read a lot of h/hr stories, which I suppose this one is. But even it is ultimately not in the end, that was an amazing scene between those two. It stays beautifully within EWE canon and fits perfectly with the rest of the story as it is progressing so far.

I'm really enjoying this!

Don

Absolutely phenomenal.

I was very drawn to this style and genre. It's one that isn't widely explored in the Harry Potter universe. The level of plotting and interpersonal relationships was engaging to say the least. I would have liked to see more Hermoine interaction, I just don't see her as being that uninvolved. Otherwise I loved this story. I really hope you decide to or are inspired to write a sequel.

Excellent!

Ireally enjoyed reading this story.

Thank you for writing it.

KUTGW,

Noreen

You managed to mutilate the characterization of literally every single character. I get that you want to develop their characters in your own way. But this isn't an AU. It's supposed to be life after Hogwarts, starting after DH. You have to start with canon characterizations and grow them in the direction you want. And you fail miserably at that. No one's personality and character is remotely similar to canon. For all intents and purposes its a bunch of OC's using the names of canon characters. And that is so fucking irritating it makes the story unreadable.

I know this story was written a couple of years ago and leaving a review now is rather redundant but I have to get this off my chest. lol

This is my second time reading this story. I kind of got irked reading it the first time because of how little Hermione was in it but realized in the summary it is a Harry P, mystery/suspense so I truly got over that. But what I can not get over in this 2nd reading is supposedly how powerful Fleur is just because she was a Tri Wizard Champion. Yeah, she completed the first task but then literally bombed in both the 2nd and 3rd task. Granted I'm sure she wasn't expecting another fellow champion to attack her, but still if she was as powerful in your story then wouldn't she have been able to fight off her attacker. I just think its ironic. lol

Good story, a little bit violent compared to your others. I was pushing to Finnish it, cause if it was any other author I would have stopped but I like your work and I wanted to see how it played out. Kind of a screwy plot line in that it was doing spirals and making my head hurt. Are you planning on any otter stories? I'm not that big of a fan of h/h another reason I was pushing myself to Finnish but it wasn't that big as some people make it. So kudos on making it discreet. Well since this isn't real productive rambling I should end it now.

doing this chapter since apparently ive reviewed the previous one before, i havent read this since before it was finished, but im re-reading the entire thing now that i got the time. two things though: 1. from your statement, you imply wine is really weak, when in fact it is fairly strong, about 1.5x-2x as strong as a 12 oz. can of beer. second im fairly confident a claddagh is a ring, not a necklace.

It occurs to me that a useful question during the veritaserum interrogations would be / have been: Do you have any specific plans making use of our plan for your own ends? Or, are there any questions we should ask you?

This is only because of the foreshadowing within the story, and probably not a question that an amateur would think up, but people do not make full use of veritaserum in HP stories.

Well that certainly wasn't what I was expecting as an ending...but I loved it anyway! The whole thing had me on the edge of my seat, laughing my head off, and not to mention bawling my eyes out... Absolutely spactacular! Cheers!

Bloodfire87

loved this story

I keep seeing a repeating pattern as I continue to read the story. Don't get me wrong, I like the story to a certain degree but I have some dislikes about it as well. The pattern I keep seeing over and over and over and over and over is how everything Harry does with Teddy, he must have an entourage even if it is one person. Other than early in the story he went to the park by himself with Teddy...that is the only time he was ever alone with his godson. Also, I find it sad that Hermione has to always share Harry with everyone. Understood this is not a romance fanfic...but still, other than the "special" night out with him and her and the once every blue moon there is no one home...is not enough. Then along comes Ginny back into their lives and if Harry has his way..living with them too. In this instance...way too much.

I'm really enjoying the story...I wish it had more Harry/Hermione action. Not romance or sex, just more of them being together and doing stuff with Teddy. It has more with Luna, Harry and Teddy than with Hermione and that seems off to me. Even if you have a sentence that states Teddy loves Hermione but he gets along better with Luna.

I find it highly ironic that Percy uses the word mudblood regarding Hermione..and yet he is with Penelope who is also a muggleborn. I wonder if this was thought about or intentional?

lmao..usually I am all for the Harry/Ginny coupling, but this turn of events is just...awesome. I'm loving it. I like Ginny as a character, but this is the first story i've read where she is being a total bytch. And I'm liking it so far.

I have been so behind in reading fics, that I just got to the last 10 chapters or so. This was an excellent story! I loved it a lot. I only wish that there was an epilogue like some of your other stories. I would have loved to see what was going to happen to everyone. Thanks for creating such a great story. I look forward to other stories by you!