Really nice fic!

Aw poor Haruka. Your writing is very beautiful, very descriptive. write more!

As soon as I saw the phrase "Michiru is dead" in the summary, I was hooked - any fic where the aqua-haired demon gets what she so richly deserves is a must-read in my book. I was a little disappointed how it was Haruka that suffered the most, not Michiru as it should have been (but that's just me). But it was a very dramatic and unexpectedly emotional development when Haruka was forced to see Michiru again so often and suffer in silence as she no longer remebered her past. But a great story!

Well written, a bit sad but thats the point.

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At least her *cousin* didn't die. (evil dub!) But still... that was sort of sad... nice try, however.

Ummm, I'm not sure what to make of this. I mean Haruka and Michiru have been in love for over a thousend years and in the space of two months Haruka is marrying someone else! How did Michiru die anyway? Any way it's not bad and thats good!