 ShadowOrpheus 2009-01-21 . chapter 1Aww,that's it? D;
We need moar chapters, plz. |
 Eclipsed Oblivion 2009-01-11 . chapter 1This was incredible. They were so in character, and I could see it happening because it was so. |
 DiZenchanted 2008-07-17 . chapter 1I first saw this when I was lurking on LJ the other day (and I would do more than just lurk, but I haven't really got the guts to post...), and I LOVED IT! And I still do! xD It's so wonderful. I hope you add on to it some day... if you don't that's still aight, I guess... but what a shame that would be! |
 Luca 2008-07-08 . chapter 1 I loved this. That's all. |
 Zero Infection 2008-06-29 . chapter 1OMG...I love it! You did a GREAT job with the characters! It all seems so real!
I hate to be...what's the word...demanding? But I SUGGEST you make a sequel? So CUTE! |
 Whiteflamedkitsune 2008-06-10 . chapter 1Aww that was really cute lol. Perhaps one of my favorite JoshuaNeku stories that I ever read lol
I really like how you portrayed(sp?) Joshua nicely and kept his arrogant attitude lolz Neku was cute too him and his stubbonness (^__^).
Oh and I think that you should jut expand your vocab. a little bit. The story was well wirtten don't get me wrong, but I think that more vocab words will enhance your stories more and give out more description within the characters and their actions.
I hope you find this helpful and I hope you write another JoshuaNeku someday (^_^)/
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 Clementine 2008-06-02 . chapter 1 Ah, so good. I loved how bittersweet it was, and the characters were perfect. Excellent :D |
 Y-Kira 2008-05-24 . chapter 1This was so in-character, it made me wanna cry. The sad parts did too, but Joshua was so...Joshua! And NekuxJoshua just makes me smile, because it's beautiful. I love this fic, and I love your style. |
 Feel the PANDA 2008-05-23 . chapter 1what the hell is wrong with you. How did you write such a beautiful fic? ;_;
My lord. This is just ... incredible! ;A;
write moar~ |
 Kuraii Koneko 2008-05-22 . chapter 1That just made my like, forever. :)
You have done a wonderful job and better yet, kept them perfectly in character. I'm really hoping and looking forward to more JoshuaxNeku in your future.
hinthintnudgewink?
:) |
 whoppers-maltesers 2008-05-21 . chapter 1Oh ho ho~ Such a fic!
Very long - I liked that ;P
And the pairing was awesome~
On top of that, I didn't see any Chat Speak or horribly Misspelled words xD
Great job on this! Maybe I'll see more IAWW/WEWY fics from you in the future? |
 sou-chan2000 2008-05-20 . chapter 1Wow...This story is just full of...WOW...
I love this so much! It's defiantly the best TWEWY fic I have read and I only wish that you write more! ( even if it's another different story from the same game)
You win.
You freakin' WIN.
XD |
 DyingHerInnocence 2008-05-19 . chapter 1I don;t believe it... It's... It's... too nice!
I really love it, my favorite now among all fanfictions in this section i already read...
especially... because you make Joshua SO ON CHARACTER! And Neku too~ xD
I like when he teasing Neku~ And I cannot stop laughing, happy, and sad when read this fanfic...
It's so touching, and I really love it...
Keep writing |
 Luciana Costa 2008-05-18 . chapter 1This story cannot be described in one word. I could call it amazing, wonderful, fabulous, the list could go on and on. I cannot express how wonderful this story is.
I was thinking it would be awkward, it seemed very awkward at first, Joshua and Neku at Neku's house. I was kinda worried it wouldn't work out well. But it did, you made it work. It was great.
I love this story, love it so much. This pairing needs more love, and you are just the one to give it. Thanks for posting this! |
 Ruemaja 2008-05-18 . chapter 1I love how you wrote it. It feels so happy and yet very very sad. Much love! |