Ahw, I love Nick how he saves her without being a real hero. Thanks for writing. **kay

Raging woman with hormones and a gun...thankfully Nick knocked some sense into her!

AWESOMENESS!

next chappie next chappie!

whoa! did not see that coming! emily on the roof with a gun? not good, not good at all. great update! totally got me with the shocker at the end!

great. nicky's getting attached. and if warrick should know anything, you don't get attached to the victims. oh warrick. bygones...nice update. i like that she told clara about nick...i'm worried for her.

whoa, twisted ending! i definitely didn't see that coming! i actually thought it was heading into the other direction...sam going after her...despite the restraining order. this story has taken on a mind of its own, yea?

so we got a fake redhead, some lipstick, and a lead pipe...

gotta love greg's humor...

also, you got hodges and wendy's flirtation down. poor hodgie...he loves her...lol

this is going great. you can really sense emily's anger. and catherine...wowza...really teared her a new one, huh?

You're building a case and it looks goos because like the CSIs I have no clues of what happened at Emily's house. So I'm getting more curious...Keep it coming.

Well I like it. I have a feeling she's not thinking on keep the baby, am I right? But I know there's more. Think you wrote the characters pretty well and respected their personalities from the show. Looks good. Keep it coming.

amazing what dreams can manifest! very interesting so far.