 Paradoxical Existence 2008-05-18 . chapter 1Oh, wow. Out of all the point-of-views, they say that second person is the most difficult to do, but you've captured it well here. This was extremely well-written, and then end was really emotional. =.( |
 tidbit2008 2008-05-18 . chapter 1So sad, but so Brennan. I love it. You really got into her head, I could def. see something like this on the show(I better not, but I *could* if heaven forbid they went that route). Anyways, very well written.
And you wrote Bones fic! My work here is done :D |
 cayoesqueleto 2008-05-18 . chapter 1Brilliant characterization, especially the portrayal of her grief as something he taught her: beautiful,perfect, and tragically disquieting in so many ways.
(I love the title.)
Thank you for sharing. |
 FF.netfanHANNAH 2008-05-18 . chapter 1Aw, sad. Lets hope this never comes true. Excellent.
keep on typing
* hannah * |
 sadie 2008-05-18 . chapter 1 this is very sweet and i do think that brennan has learned a lot about how to be 'normal'from booth and i think that this is how she would react. |
 Aching Bones 2008-05-18 . chapter 1Hi there,
Oh this is just too sad, too emotional and too poignant. I just can not take anything ever happening to our duo. Her standing at his grave and trying to remember all that he had told her when she had visited her mother's grave with him...
Have to go, just too sad...but this was really nice.
Ger |