I honestly wish you had written more for this story is extremely well done!

Clever story hook

The idea of a jinx as the hook for your story work very well.

Your story has a good plot line and the story arc is well written and develops nicely from chapter to chapter.

The dialog of the characters is believable as is the way they are portrayed.

Mia is a very well thought out as a character and is fun to read about as well, well done a good story

I absolutely love this story. Its wonderful. :)

I enjoyed this story so much! I really got a kick out of Mia. I wish you would have continued the story a little longer, a few more adventures before going back to the Academy. But still it was great.

This was a nice little story, but it doesn't really seem finished. The 'jinx' premise doesn't get properly introduced or dismissed/explained.

Great intro chapter: D

Very interesting: )