i cnt wait for chapter 4!! this story is awsome:D

Hey.
I really like this, i like how Edward thinks . . .tis very Edward-ish and not OOC (not that i mind OOC's its just you don't get a lot with him being un-OOC)

This is a really good start!

are you ever going to update? please ! :: insert puppy dog eyes:: :P

This is so good! i love how you incorporated twilight with your own ideas! seriously im impressed! im so glad i found this site! Keep up the good work and finish chapter four soon please:)
your newest fan, emily

This was a cute little story, are you planning to continue it?

Bella Bella Bella we still haven't learned to quit drinkin after one have we...tsk tsk what ARE we going to do with you?

awesommee! I really love this so far. can't wait for moree!

good so far please finish

So far i like it can't wait for more.

Are you going to continue this? It has a very promising start!! I hope you update soon.

Aw, I'm disappointed to see that this hasn't been updated in over a month. :( I was just having fun too. This is a great story, and I can't wait to read more! I hope to see a new chapter soon!

that's me
ahhelga
aka Pauline

Looking forward to an update soon! Your visuals are fabulous!

A really sweet story, I'm all for the All human fanfics, and love your piece.

I hope to read an update soon, can't wait to see what happens next!

thumbs up ;)

i love this story line. and how jessica is evil! im just wondering if this is an edwardxbella story? and i really want the sneak peek!