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pagelupin
2009-06-13 . chapter 5
Lol. Gotta love the happy endings. Especually after all that sadness. I cried quite a few times actually. But it just means that it was that good of a fic. So keep up the brilliant work! XD
K-naille
2008-09-10 . chapter 5
Yay! I loved your fic! They're really too stupid for their own good!

The first chapter was surprising, but I kept going and I find it (almost) perfect: not too long, easy to read, with some appearence of the other characters, and fights!

Thank you!
freak-4-God
2008-07-29 . chapter 1
she gets pregnant doesn't she?
hj
2008-06-30 . chapter 5
Words can't describe it, that was perfect. I want a prologue! And I have to see some of the other stuff you write.
BrittMarie
2008-05-31 . chapter 5
Perfect.
:D
BrittMarie
2008-05-31 . chapter 3
"All's fair in love and war."

... this + "Dragula" by Rob Zombie = BIGGER WIN!
BrittMarie
2008-05-31 . chapter 1
This chapter + "Lying Is The Most Fun A Girl Can Have Without Taking Her Clothes Off" by Panic! At The Disco = WIN!
I love it!
TheMightyErrg
2008-05-29 . chapter 5
Cool Enging ! Had me worried there for a bit.

Liked it very much. Looking forward to more of your work.
Liooness
2008-05-29 . chapter 5
great story and loved how it turned out. it almost had a beauty and the beast feel to it and i loved it. great job
smartcheer917
2008-05-29 . chapter 5
that was really cute!
thexgreatxtriplexc
2008-05-29 . chapter 5
Ah, that's such a great ending. I loved this story.
Leatherbound
2008-05-29 . chapter 5
I really liked it. It was well written and conveyed a lot of emotion, well done.
charizardag
2008-05-29 . chapter 5
More awesome then the first. nice job
Liooness
2008-05-26 . chapter 4
great chapter andn i loved the letter too! and toph! toph rules all. great chapter
Phoenix Wingz
2008-05-26 . chapter 4
Wow. Its already going to end? Buts it so short =O! Oh well. It was nice while it lasted XD. Anyway, the part I like was how Zuko acted around Katara in this chapter. I also like the letter part and the Toph moments. I don't really dislike anything so its all good =)
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