Really cool story... hope to read more soon

different.
good luck
karakot

I like this, please update.

Just a tinsy bit of constructive critism...

You've got Mal's speach just right, so no probs there.

I think a bit more detail is needed for those who haven't seen Firefly and Serenity. Just so they don't feel excluded. Possible descibe more into the charecters a bit more and such, so it helps to form a clearer image in their heads.

Also, when Mal tells Zoe and Simon to take team tardis and lock them up, I kinda get the feeling it should be Jayne rather than Simon, seeing as he's the stronger, more hands on guy.

Other than that great job :P

original idea!! interesting to see where you go with this :-)

Awesome so far.
Firefly and Doctor Who.
A mixture of my two favourite TV shows!
Excellent!
>:3
I'll be reviewing for the entire story, so BEWARE!
-runs off laughing maniacally-

I keep my chibi!Reavers in a box under my bed. :)

Updates are needed!! *^_^*