Very good job relating the tale from Yuffie's perspective, and smart move too because it would be almost unbearably tragic if her humor and quirkiness weren't lightening the mood. Aerith completely forgets Zack! That's heartbreaking! The reader does wonder about that KH quirk where thinking about a person can give them the ability to come back, so maybe there was some hope in that barely perceived memory. I'm honestly hoping that Square will keep Zack alive in the KH world, they're already bending the rules with Aerith being there, so why not Zack?

Wow.. I love the idea of this story. It's about some kind of memory of a person and her soulmate in some parallel world, huh?

Since Zack is now a KH character, I would be very grateful if you make the second chapter of this story, when KH Aerith and Zack finally meet each other. They feel that they ever been very close before, whereas actually they just met. Oww..that would be sweet... Will you do it? Pretty pleeaasee? *puppy eyes*

I really like the way you put Zack in most of your stories, when you're talking about Aerith. I've never read that before and it just needs to be mentioned.

Awesome, like always. You never cease to amaze!

Such a wonderful grip on the language, you have!

-K

YHAY! A zerith!

It's nice to think Zack would probably appear in the KH series.

After all..

most of the FF people in KH are from the 7th anyway.

So Zack SHOULD appear.

Plus... is it me, or did Aerith confused Cloud with Zack?

If such a thing such as a parallel universe ever actually existed... I always wondered if somehow in our suppressed memory if we could remember other people from there... it would be interesting.

This was a very good story and it was cute, written in basically Yuffie's POV. I loved it!

I love this. Especially the way you connected Zack into the KH series.

-passes out-

ILOVEYOU

mmkay.

D'aw, a Zerith! Kinda sad though, but Yuffie tends to...lighten the mood...I guess.

This just shows that Zack should be in the next Kingdom Hearts. If Aerith and Sephiroth are alive, why not Zack, right?

Good oneshot! _