Sorry to say - 1408 is one of my top 3 favorite shorts by Steve King, and this doesn't do it much justice. You should cut the music lyrics, that's the mark of a bad writer to put a whole lyric into the text.
I think you could probably make it better, with some work though.

Very interesting, though may I critque a few things?
Be sure to check over grammatical errors, I know I know, I make alot of them myself, but it is good to look over it just incase. (I understood a few of the misspelled words but others may not.)
I have one more but I rather say that your story is quite fascinating, I would love to read the short story '1408'. (Granted, I have only seen the movie)
You have hit the nail upon why this room chooses these people, but you must be a little more descriptive in areas. At the ending it kind of left me aloft, what was going on through Samantha's head? Did she know that Pepper killed Samantha's ex? (I may have missed a part so tell me if I have, I can be a indulent fool at times XD)
These are just my silly little suggestions, you do not have to take them.
I do wish you would add a second chapter to this story, I think it will add some depth to it.

LadyRedVelvet

OMG tht was pretty creepy! I really liked that one! Thanks! Poor Pepper! I've only seen the movie and I read like, one page of the short story, but this was pretty good! Thanks for this one!

Awesome story! Very emotional and well-written! The way 1408 claimed it's victim was very ingenoius, and you must do a sequel, I would love to read it!