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danielovitch
2009-11-28 . chapter 20
worst story ever read
tesst
2009-11-10 . chapter 20
i read this story, and i can honestly saw, it is one of the best i've read from this series.
ChannyIsLove
2009-08-22 . chapter 17
were they in the sickness tree? oh boy.
Yoshi Pikachu
2009-07-07 . chapter 20
I finally just finished reading it. The end was very sad.
.Amberleaf.
2009-06-20 . chapter 14
Ew! >:( That was SO gross! >:(
WarriorAddicted
2009-06-12 . chapter 20
WHY?WHY?
wolf
2009-06-01 . chapter 20
i hated this story so much I loved it.
May Emerald
2009-05-23 . chapter 10
what happens to siftpaw?
anon
2009-05-07 . chapter 1
Can NOBODY get prophecies right? they are supposed to be mysterious.

mysterious:mɪˈstiəɹiəs
adjective: of unknown origin; having unkown qualities

this means that you do NOT write exactly what will happen. you make it mysterious. you know that word i just defined for you? yes that one
anon
2009-05-06 . chapter 20
You appear to have created two biohazard level 6 threats. congrats
anon
2009-05-06 . chapter 16
you have created two biosafety level 4 diseases, which would require a Hazmat team to dispose of. congratulations, you could now technically be considered a terrorist
anonymous
2009-05-06 . chapter 7
fuck u u are retarded u shud not be alowd nera a computre u ar the the bigest retard to ever egist
anonymous
2009-05-06 . chapter 7
You do realize that the organism that could cause the kind of disease used in this fic is a virus, and that in order to get the same results as you disease, it would have to be an artificial virus? I say this because it would have to identify the Y chromosome, and specifically target cells containing it, and even then the only possible result would be sterility in the infected. I know that you can get access to the internet, so you could at least USE the resources at your disposal (try google)
anon
2009-05-06 . chapter 5
This is not The Greatest Song in the World, No
This is just a tribute.
Couldn't remember The Greatest Song in the World, No.
No!
This is a tribute, oh,
To The Greatest Song in the World,
All right!
It was The Greatest Song in the World,
All right!
And it was the best mother fuckin' song,
The Greatest Song in the world!
anonymous
2009-05-06 . chapter 2
you are mentally, physically, and morally retarded. I do not understand how you were ever allowed to go anywhere near a keyboard in the first place
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