Hiya!
Just finished reading chapter 3. Beyond Black and White and I almost cried poor Tom! Poor children! So far I'm really liking yyour story...very emotional and deep =D

so far loving it! ^_^

i loved the story but the end is confusing...
are you going to write antoher

I must admit, I laughed at some very inappropriate places to laugh at. But can you blame me? Most of the extraordinarily funny innuendo was placed within conversations that dripped with darkness. The darkness was so beautifully crafted and twisted, like Ginny's dance with herself. It gives off a feeling of power that I can't help but try to absorb. Well done. Makes me wish I could write. Oh, and Riddle is a nice piece of ass.

Wow, this morning my alarm woke me up out of a dream from this fic. o.o It took place during this scene (in the chamber), only it was a bit different seeing as it was a dream and my dreams are prone to changing scenes. But I, in the dream, had already read this fic and knew what was going to happen, and so even though I was clinging in terror to the guy next to me (I have no idea who he was, but he was terrified too, since we were so close to being caught in the crossfire) there was a part of dream-me going, okay, so now Ginny gouges out her eyes... oh, eww, I can't watch!

Ginny was really pretty and Tom was really hot in the dream. He wasn't Chamber of Secrets!Tom or Half-Blood Prince!Tom, he was different. But so, so hot.

I think there was more to the dream but it's slipping away now as dreams do. Sad.

I just had to tell you since you're the author. By the way, are you planning to update the sequel soon? Just wondering, no pressure. :)

Ok, truthfully, I really liked your story, but I thought it went a little downhill when you brought in the evil Ginny. Things just got too confusing. But overall, I really liked the whole thing. I'm a total Harry/Ginny shipper, but you just got me interested in Time-Traveling Ginny/Tom Riddle pairings. I'm gonna have to see if there's any others, after I read your sequel, of course.

You should have used 'Chelsea Smile'

Glasgow is what they called it in Scotland ;
Chelsea Smile in England..
:D

This is probably the best TRGW I've read, or perhaps more accurately, the one I've liked the best.

One thing I find a little odd, though, is Ginny's ready acceptance of Tom at first when she arrives in the past. I mean, he DID really kill, or were at least responsible for, the deaths of her loved ones. I think at least I might be prone to fits of rage against him in that kind of situation, despite the way she already then realizes that Tom is different from Voldemort. I also think that perhaps Ginny is a little bit too overpowered; that she masters advanced branches of magic a little too easily for it to be... well, within the realms of canon and fanon, realistic.

But I really like your portrayal of the characters - their humanity. The way that the characters - well, Ginny at least, because it's mostly through her eyes we see the story - while thinking that killing is wrong, she's ready to (almost, because she definitely tries to convince Tom of the wrongness of his acts in that aspect) accept, or at least forgive him for it, because she loves him. The story doesn't try to teach its readers about morality; it just tells a tale of humans through Ginny's very human eyes. That, I like. And then, who doesn't like some well-written dark romance?

I hope that makes sense. Anyway, thank you for writing! It was a pleasure reading.

Wow. This has got to be one of the best Tom/Ginny fics I've read! True, the time-travel plot bunny isn't exactly the most original, but you took it and totally made it your own! I loved the way you portrayed all the different personalities of Tom and Ginny (literally!) and how nothing was ever black or white. I would have loved to know what happened to Eileen, but then perhaps I'll find out in the sequel? So to sum up this little ramble, you Madame, are a brilliantly talented writer (and lyricist!)! Great job, I'm definitely looking forward to reading more from you!
~Adalé

Well, I can tell you. Ve'been a long time since I was so absorbed in a story. dont wanna go out or meet somebody, just read this piece

though... I need to admit I overflew the first chapter, cause... dunno. Too many ideas of this kind and all of them nothing.

But then I read the first twist between Ginny and Tom and I was like :o gawd... what a girl! I mean... I give a lot about IC and OOC. But with Ginny I dont care, I mean it was war, she lost them all, its allowed to be bitter and all of this

and yeah! Tom was sometimes really... naiice, but all in all... woah, I can tell!! You really did an awesome job on him and the relation between the two
I love EVERY conversation these loonis have, I swear!

Right now I'm in the middle of the story and usually I wouldnt write an review lol but you mixed up a lot of emotions in me! Needed to tell you this

first - great songs. I listen to kate and tunstall all through the chapters. really nice

second and I need to quote this:"And it wasn’t just this Tom that she loved. In her own, twisted way she loved Riddle as well. Perhaps, if she followed him through the shadows to the darkness she might love Voldemort as well"

WOW :o I was so stunned by this. I swear... this is great psychology xD no I love this. What a plot, what characters. Gosh :D

and there I was at the beginning thinking that you need to get more into ginnys feelings about the war and harry and all, because it happend kind of fast...

yeah... and just another tiny thing: the slytherins are so non-slytherin-ish. if you know what I mean. moare pure blood attitude wouldnt have hurt :) but we will see.

Just wanted to tell you
I'm amazed by the story. I longed so much for something profound, somthing to be absored in it and there I found your story.
Great Tom Character. Great Plot. Great Tension Building :D and now I keep on reading.

Maybe write you later
cheers!

wait a minuet... did tom kill the two siblings or not? i luvd the stry but this last chapter realy confused me! lol! great job on the rest though!

This story was AMAZING and i loved it so much, how you characterize Ginny and Tom is great, you did such a good job of making them real and believable, esp Tom's evil side! But honestly I was like totally lost from the point when she met Evil!Ginny and jumped into the never ending pit...after that I had no idea what was going on, and I still don't understand how Ginny was in Tom's mind controlling him, or what the whole bit about her going back to 18 was about and how she ended up evil...so ALL of that made like no sense to me lol. I need it explained haha.
PLUS i was sad there was no sex scene!! :P But there WAS a lot of romantic anst and sexual tension but damn i wanted them to 'burn together'!!

i can't wait to read the sequel. :D

Love it, Love it (=

Ah! i love this fic! except, a few kinda kreepy things, in my opinion, like how riddle cuts himself, or how the older Ginny had no chin. just a few things that made shivers crawl up my spine. but other thatn that, it was great!^^ thank you, I will be reading that next story!

This story is one of my all time favourites. It's very well written and the plot line really believable.