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| Window2MySoul 2008-06-28 ch 1,  | abusewhy is peter such a ,ehem 'donkey' sometimes? lol. great story. i loved how you really grasped all the characters. very well written :D |
| wildfire41 2008-06-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is lovely! Looking forward to reading more Narnian stories from you! |
| Tarien Lakilea Tel'anor 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseI liked this story. There was the problem in that I kept wondering why Lucy didn't use her cordial, but other than that I really liked the story. |
| JustinRockMyBody 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abuseTotally cute and believable! You really can continue it thu! :D I don't mind reading more of your story! ;) |
| Lens 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abuseThis seemed like a plausible scene. Good work, anyhow. |
| wild wolf free17 2008-05-22 ch 1, | abuseLovely. |
| FebruarySong 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuseI |
| Hermioneee 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuseThis was great! It wasnt cheesy or unrealistic- and i LOVED it. is this a one-shot, or are there going to be more chapters? i love it!! |
| KCS 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuseAh, I loved that! Ed's reactions were oh so realistic without being soppy as many of these stories get - and Peter's inability to promise was a great touch. Well done! |