WOW...just, WOW

Bringing the epic once more...

A quick question though, did you have a third story in mind when you wrote the epilogue or did you figure that you had said all that was needed to be said at the time? Either way, I plan on reading the third installment, although I must say that your writing has given me a serious bout of the inspirations to bang out my own KP fanfic so I may put the reading on hold to do so. Well done!

Once again, a great story.

You really took your own view on season 4, and I got to say; I liked it.

one minor pointer: throughout the story, there were several spelling mistakes such as forgotten letters or spaces, most of them could be easily detected by spel-checks. the mistakes are not at a level that makes the story annoying to read, but they are noticable. Again, this is just a minor pointer but it might be good to know for any upcoming stories.

I'm sure to read the next story in the series, and I hope it will be as good as this one.

keep up the good writing,
Reader101w

A good story, don't usaulyl lke kim and ron pairings, because its so obvious, but i liked this. Will check if you have any other long storys if not please make some more.

I just wanted to know why Felix and Yori wouldn't be able to have sex. What kind of Spinal cord injury does he have? Parapelegics have sex and children all the time; thats the only part of the story that really troubles me.

Thanks

Daccu65 I loved your description of the football game. There was much suspense. I also was attracted to the details of it.

Concerning Monty's lawyer: the recording would probably be considered privileged communication, and would be impossible to show to a judge without Monty's express consent. Furthermore, the recording wouldn't necessarily convince a judge that he's not competent to stand trial; the law defines being competent as "the defendant's ability to consult rationally with an attorney to aid in his own defense and to have a rational and factual understanding of the charges." Monty fulfills both of these criteria. As far as the criminal justice system cares, "insane" isn't a medical term as much as a legal one. Just because he's off his rocker doesn't necessarily qualify him for an insanity plea. Furthermore, being found criminally insane isn't really a good thing- you're liable to find yourself with a longer sentence in a mental hospital than you would've had in a prison.

-John

Well done, I am impressed. I was a little disappointed to see the wrap-up of everyone's lives at the end, as it seemed to signal a definate end to the series. Better that though than leaving one hanging. I thought that perhaps Amy was going to swoop in as an unwitting savior to Kim's infertility by trying to frame Ron of having a relationship with Shego resulting in a child created from the DNA taken from her staff. It's wierd and out there, but it jumped into my mind when I wondered what she'd do with the DNA from the staff. I am a little curious as to why the Amy arc wasn't resolved, I doubt she'd be willing to lay low for the rest of her life, after all "she's entitled". Then again the new body may provide near agelessness and she's just doing the smart thing and waiting until Kim and Ron pass before she strikes again. Or maybe I just think too much!

Thanks for the great story!

Aedan

I’d like to ask for a round of applause for my beta reader, Joe Stoppinghem. If you’re here, Joe, please stand up.” (The sounds of crickets chirping in the background breaks the silence.)

Daccu65, I just have to say the further the story went, the less work was for me to do. It wasn't work, I just had the opportunity to see the work in advance.

What I must say is, you took the stories we are very familiar with and put a very different but realistic spin on them. Congrats, a job well done. I to hope you will grace this section of the FF site for a few more for fun and profit. No wait skip the last part.

Finally, I must bring up one item that I missed too in the epilogue that Bonnie's life was not mentioned. Let me know when you have a chance to address this.

Best of luck and hope to be your B/R in the future. (Gee that kind of sounds sick and wrong).

A rousing end to a fulfilling, enjoyable journey. One loop unclosed, what did Amy do with the DNA she stole from Ron and Shego? I didn't want to stop and review chapter by chapter, so this is for the last three. Outstanding. Had a moment's smile at Yori's soft remark. So much scarier than a yell or bellow. :) Sorry to hear you're taking a sabbatical, but I hope it does you well and you come back with another epic. Thanks for all the fun.
Spectre

Hey Daccu65!
Excellent, amazing, and just down-right superb work with your novel of a fanfic. I guess a simple but meaningful "YOU ROCK" is in order, eh? The story was easy to follow, not a single error ever stood out (Way to go, Joe Stoppinghem!), and I was always curious for the next chapter. Your writing was a very good read, and I support you in your future works. Please return to the KPverse soon, I anxiously await your next endeavor!
Best regards from your friend,
NakedMoleDogg

And so it comes to an end. This final chapter really wrapped things up for everyone in a satisfying way. While it left me hungry for more, it tied up most of the loose ends so well that even if you never continue this, there will be no void. The story really was brought to an end here.

I was expecting Warmonga to be still alive since nobody is ever dead unless there's a body. However, what was a complete surprise to me was that she hadn't injected Ron and Shego with anything but had instead taken their DNA. Now that I think about it, it's so obvious that I don't know why I never even thought about it. The fact that you left her fate open gives you the perfect chance to write a sequel if you ever feel like.

The way all the different couples got together and got their lives into order was very satisfying to read. I'm glad that you didn't make Kim and Ron some super rich and super famous celebrity couple. I've enjoyed your portrayal of their relationship more than anybody else's because all through the story you've treated them as human beings with flaws instead of two picture perfect heroes. The Kim and Ron in this story fight, have doubts, feel sorrow and make mistakes, but they're also understanding, learn from what they do and love each other very much. You got everything about them exactly the way I see it. If you hadn't written these two and their relationship this well, I doubt this story would have been half as interesting as it was. Kim and Ron really grew up in the course of this fic.

Drakken's fate was a surprise for me, but I quickly warmed up to the idea. I also enjoyed the friendship/possible romance he developed with Dr. Director. Now that is an idea worth exploring.

I also want to congratulate you for the great portrayal of Shego and Monty and their relationship. You developed them both very far from what they originally were, and especially Monty became much more adjusted and sane through the events. I don't think I have ever seen anybody write him as humane as you did here. I very much enjoyed this portayal of him as a gentlemanly but ruthless archaeologist/thief because it's so different from everything else I've read but still firmly rooted in canon and character development. The only thing that I'm still wondering about these two is the whole baby issue. Drakken revealed that Shego can have children in some way, but did Monty ever tell about that to her? The issue was completely dropped from the fic, which makes sense since it wasn't essential to the plot in any way, but I am left wondering if it was just filler material or if you really left it open like that for some purpose.

Another element that fascinates me is whether the treatment had any effect on Felix or not. The epilogue makes it seem like everything is fine, so I hope that there won't be any unwanted side effects at any point of his life.

All in all, this has been one of the most amazing and enjoyable KP fanfics I have ever read. I am saddened to see that it has come to an end because it was so much fun to read a new chapter each week, but at the same time I am glad that you finished it on such a good note. I really want to thank you and your beta for making this fic and sharing it with the whole fandom. Good luck with your fanfics in other categories!

wow.. pretty good ending. did well man.

excellent ending Daccu and I'll follow your other stories closley, but what happened to Warmonga?

My word. What a fantastic final three chapters. I'm late with my reviews on them, but better late than never! This entire series of yours between the two stories, over one hundred chapters... it was all *so* wonderful.

The final chapter was great. I love how you wrapped up each person's bit in the story, and happily I might add. I was slightly surprised to see a "Nine year in the future" sort of second epilogue, honestly. I didn't know if you planned on making a third series to this to pick up on Warmonga's escape and what not, but I guess that might be in the future for you after you finish your other work? Either way, I loved this whole series.

Curious about what happened at the very end. Did Kim use the link-up with Ron's MMP to help impregnate her? I figured that's what the "orbs" had to do with; the sperm/egg. If so, then hooray for a Kim getting pregnant and them having a little Stoppable on the way. :D

Anyway, I hope you have a good New Years. Stay safe!

Fantastic story! I enjoyed reading it very much. Thanks for the great read.