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Hillarous i loved it poor girls

nice ending haha snake

Hahahaha, wow.

I love Snake's random comment there at the end. That was pretty funny. xD

just too funny especially love part about snake

“That babe can whip me into shape anytime,” Snake said.

Samus whipping, how appropriate. I love the last line, as you know. xD

Me: LOL That last line is always the best and the pun was great.

Not much to say since I already said it on DA.

Continue with good one-shots.

Of course Snake is the only one who would be ok. He seems most likely to workout in a gym. At least Snakes got no competition but it looks like he has no idea how extreme that actually can be for your body.

"That babe can whip me into shape anytime."

BA-DUM CRASH.

Very nice, well written one-shot, if I do say so myself. I think I spit up my Sprite at the whipping scene, and the final line? Priceless.

haha! that totally reminds me about tomorrow's aerobic class. wo! :D

hehe, I love how Samus is a sort of hybird of me and my trainer. XD

Very nice story. Faved for future reading.