Reviews for Codename Genesis

Bluegrass
2008-05-19
ch 1,

abuseHm, doesn't sound like Scott is in a very good place right now! And I'm not sure I even want to think of what they're doing to him. Secret experiments...human guinea pigs! Biotech is a very sinister place!

Nice interaction between Virgil and John, down in the hangar and John, with that awkward feeling of being back home.

Overall, good detailing and an intriguing plot, of sinister goings on within a sinister powerful corporation, though try and keep an eye on punctuation and where sentences end and start.

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