great story. loved it

AMAZING a real pick me up for a bad day WOW!

That was amazingly detailed and the dialouge was pitch perfect for the characters. Pacing was excellent.

I usually don't like first persons and I normally read oneshots, but I really enjoyed this story. It didn't drag on, it had a really good amount of detail and I really liked the language. It was sensual without being vulger and I really appreciate that in a story.

Great story! Well done.

So this the difference between descriptions of making love and regular smut. You captured the action, the emotion, with your technique of a succession of short paragraphs very well.

Best line:

“Do you think that for one night…just one night…you could tell that infuriating voice in your head to go to hell.”

Best lines (reminding us of why Daniel is the best negotiator in SGC):

“Screw the regulations!”

“I’ll see you on Monday.”

Beautiful! Thank you!

Ahh... so romantic! I read anothert storu recently that had a similar plot but I have to admit I like this one way beeter!

I JUST WANTED TO LET YOU KNOW THAT I LOVED YOUR STORY. IT WAS A GREAT STORY AND VERY WELL WRITTEN.

I loved this story. I'm usually a sam/jack shipper but I think this may have tured me.

This story hooked me for the begining. Good job, can't wait to read more of your work. Keep it up!

I am just blown away by how fantastic this is, I really really am. Normally I have a hard time reading first person perspectives because it is so easy to mess up, if you're not careful, but that definitely was not the case here.

The characters we believable, the dialogue the perfect mix of sweet and heart thuddingly sexy.

I definitely enjoyed reading this story.

great story:)