Man. McQueen was a kick-ass character, and this story captures him perfectly. I like the idea that he was conscious even before 'birth', and felt the same calmness and protection as natural children, if to a more extreme extent. It's great to watch the development of a character like him. Can't wait to read the next part!

i can't believe i'm only reading this now!...and theres no more of it!...it's good why didn't you complete it?

that was really good. Nice character portrayal.

I like the story so far, I can't wait to read the next chapter.