HI Suki76!! I LOVE your Kakasaku stories. I used to be a HUGE sasusaku fan, but I think Sasuke has gone off the deep end, and that Kakashi can love Sakura and take care of her much better than Sasuke ever could. Eden is SO amazing. I love how you write. Can't wait for the next chapter. Um, I would just like to say that I would absolutely LOVE to proofread your stories before you post them or the ones already posted. I am new to this site so I have no idea how it works or how you can get a hold of me. Um, I guess that's all I have to say. KEEP WRITING!! YOU ABSOLUTELY ROCK! :D

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Just wanted to let you know, it's 'I'm' not 'Am' when a person is refering to themselves, brilliant story so far though ^^

You should really consider getting a beta-reader because I noticed quite a few errors ranging from miss spelled and missing words to incorrectly placed spaces and un-capitalized words ... however, discounting that the story was pretty good, I'm still not sure what they are supposed to do at the resort once they find the couple, but I suppose that I'll learn that later. Over all I would give it a 3 out of 5

so far so good keep up the great work :)

update soon i love it

I've got no doubt that you are right there - this is going to be a very interesting mission for the two of them. I just can't help but wonder about that Eden place. It sounds fishy. What businessman would go to all the trouble of getting free hotel and tea shop accommodation for all those 'peasants' even if they ARE planning on spending time in their resort.

Other than that, the story is unfolding great! I'm amazed by the hard work you've put in planning and writing this fic. I'm looking forward to reading more of it so keep it up. ^o^

Your writing isn't bad, it's just unpolished. You need to read over some things so that they flow better. I love the sweetness in this chapter. You've also portrayed a jealous Sakura who is still in denial about her jealousy. The story is moving along nicely. Just make sure you take the time to re-read it after you write it. I know I learned a lot of my mistakes by re-reading my work. Good Job! See you soon!

oh man this is to good to quit now. i really hope you update this.

OMFG! Write More DAT STORY ROCKS!

This story sounds really familiar, did you get your idea from another author? I'm sorry if I'm incorrect, but this story just sounds exactly like a story I've read before, did you rewrite it? I'm not trying to flame you, really, but I think I have read your story before, at least the first chapter. Once again if I'm wrong, I apologize.

More!~

Very cute!

its great r u going to keep writeing chapters

There were a lot of grammer mistakes, like using am instead of I'm etc... but the plot line is good and despite the grammer issues you still wrote a nice start to a promising story! :) Hmm I just hope that kakashi really isn't dating Kurenai i mean she was with Asuma, and I doubt she'd date anyone else for quite a while. But yeah it was good so please update again soon!

yea! i love it! please update again soon