Ouch! If only Jaken knew xD It would probably break the lil dude's heart though. Meh. Never liked him except for comical relief.

LOL! It was so cute!

Puppies and followers are mutual disagreeable, does Jaken not realize his lord was a puppy once? Funny.

lmao. thats all i can say. .

*Wide grin* Your last lines are always the ones that tie up the entire fanfic well, and that's when the true humor comes in. Go Rin! (Even though she's probably the second or third most important character in this fanfic.) Rin has a nice sense of humor as well. Lucky dog! Random, but I just felt like shouting that. D.

AquaWater99

aww..too funny. very cute.

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lol Awesomeness! _ I loved it! Keep up the good work!