Ah...I love this Evie/Edward pairing so much. Screw Bella. Let her have the dog. EVIE/EDWARD!

YOU ALMOST MAKE ME CRY! I've been listening ALL types of sad songs for the last two days.

Great story, LOVE IT

you're a GENIOUS! I'm relieved that I finally found a good Edward\OC! I've been looking for one for a LONG time...

Great story. and love Evies personality!! :D

hi!! well, I have some things to say, but before I want to let you know that I'm learning english, I'm mexican, so if you see any mistake, is because of that.

I really like the way you write, but what I hated is that Eve was the "good and selfless" girl, that Bella was explained so selfish and immature, I think that all the thing that Evie did, Bella could do too.

I hated the fact that Edward chose Bella and it's going to change her just because Evie ask him for, I felt like he chose Bella at the end because she was the last one.

It's very different the relationship between Edward/Evie and Bella/Jacob, she knew since the beggining that Edward was the chosen one, it hurted her to leave Jacob, but she did it almost immeadiately, Edward had to run away to decide it.

Maybe I'm stubborn because I love Edward/Bella 100% fics, but it's what I thing, if I made you feel dislike, I'm really sorry, I would love to talk to you if you want, or if I affect you, maybe you thing that my opinion isn't important, and maybe it's true, because there are other 280 that read your fic, and just 1 review doesn´t make a big difference, but I'm also a writter (poor quality, but a writter at the end) and on my own, I would like to know all the points of view.

take care of you

Beautiful story until the end! Why did he have to be with Bella? Evie was such a nice girl, i really liked her... i would have prefer for him to stay with her... I'm sorry but unlike a lot of ppl out there i do not like Bella...

edward should of stayed with evie not bella thats so not fair she died n bella gets him well she shouldnt have him at all cuz that no

cool story! can't see why they can't co-exist if bella has jacob...Evie is a cool character!

SO didn't expect that to gappen!

Oh my goodness, I enjoyed that story so much - well done. Wow! I stayed up so late reading that, you wouldn't believe. Couldn't stop reading. There's just something about it. It's creative and different, so great job. I thought that this was an amazing story. You built to an awesome climax perfectly. To be honest, in your story my favourite characters were Alice and Jasper. That's a first for me, because my fave character is Edward! lol. You also made me like Jacob!

I hated what Edward did in this story though, to be honest. He just wouldn't ever, ever do that to Bella in the real story. Bella's supposed to be his first love. (but it's great that you changed the rules in your story!)
However, Bella got on my nerves a lot of the time though. But he ended up with her in the end, so I'm happy. I'm sorry but I hated Evie. I couldn't help it.
Twilight vampires can't cry though lol! :o so it was weird that they did in your story.

I loved the ending, but I was very upset before that - when I found out who Edward chose. This story got me crying when Edward told Bella he was leaving to decide who he wanted to be with. When Bella cried, I cried. (And I never cry when I'm reading!)

Again, well done! I loved it. :D

I think that you wrote a wonderful story and you were brilliant to write about Bella/Edward/Evie because it shows that you are truly a romantic person. You have understanded the lesson S.M tried to get through to people when she wrote the Twilight Saga. This is one of my favorites and I think you should write more stories like this but with different characters like Bella/Edward/Tanya and Edward falls in love with Tanya after he proposes to Bella and she gives him an ultimatium.

i love this it was so awsome i was so sad when evie died but im glad that she knew who made edward happy and he will be happy i loved the writing

perfect ending kinda sad how things happened between the mthought cant wait to read more of your work

All through this story i wanted to rip Evie's head off and stab Edward with a scissor. i knew it wasn't Evie's fault that she loved Edward but i just felt so depressed seeing bella think about suicide... i've experienced that and it's not easy, it takes a lot to push you over the edge. In the end, I realized Evie had a point but the story still bugged me a bit. All in all AWESOME JOB! im just not a big fan of Evie.

to telly ou the truth.. i WAS going to flame this story becuz i thought EVIE was going to win.. but you are just so great I think the infamous one and only Stephenie S. Meyer - creater of the award winning Twilight Saga - would be jealous..

This story was filled with suspence, heatbreak, sorrow, pain, truth, and last but not least.. LOVE!!

U dont understand what thi story did to me.. I am not much of an emotional girl.. but i CRYEDD.. I worship on the ground beneeth your feet..

I have one fabour to ask you??
Not to be BOLD but could read my story "Surfer Chick".. its a work in progress.. but would LOVE to know that you eather give my story a do or don't.. it wold mean the world to me :) ♥

Love,
You faithful Pesant.. Santyna (San-tee-na) Xoxo ♥

PS: Wow ;) ♥

Oh, this was fantastic! I can tell you spent a lot of time on this. Way to go!! I kinda wish there was more... Evie's life with Tanya and her folks. Could be interesting... :)