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| ejliason 2008-08-14 ch 7, | abuselove this story. Mer kicked Thatchers ass. Need more please. |
| izzygeorge 2008-07-18 ch 7, | abuseUh oh...Thatcher's free?? Loved the George and Lexie scene. I like the "Izzie and Lexie are similar" reference! As you know, I think they would be a great pair of friends! Anyway...I liked this chapter a lot! Favorite quote is "I'd rather give a leper a facial!" So funny! I can't wait to read another! |
| McMackenzie 2008-07-16 ch 7, | abuseUh...Oh... Get him. UPdate soon. please. |
| izzygeorge 2008-07-13 ch 6, | abuseI loved it the first time and I still love it! i am a fan of longer chapters as opposed to breaking them up though. Not that it really matters...just my preference. So...how are the other characters going to factor in here? I like how Mer is still only with Lexi out of guilt. I am looking forward to seeing how that unfolds! |
| Sarah11650 2008-07-13 ch 6, | abuselove this! update soonn! |
| izzygeorge 2008-07-11 ch 4, | abuseI liked this chapter because it showed a little of where Thatcher had come from. One of the hardest things is to give characters sympathetic and unsympathetic qualities. I think Meredith is the quintessential example of this...she's flawed but also likeable... What about lexi...is she really that self sacrificing that she has no anger towards meredith? Where Meredith was angry at Lexie because "daddy chose Lexie" maybe Lexi has anger towards Mer because Mer escaped...just a thought. As always...i love it! -Jess |
| Sarah11650 2008-07-08 ch 3, | abuseI still really like this! It's getting better with each update. Can't wait for more! |
| gaforever 2008-07-05 ch 3, | abuseGreat chapter, glad Mer went to Dr Wyatt to talk about what she was feeling help get a handle on her thoughts. Still a little concerned about their safety, even if Lexie is safe in the hospital away from Thatcher doesn't mean there isn't still a threat even if no-longer for Lexie but also Meredith afterall Thatcher is still on the loose. Anyway cant wait to see what happens next; update soon x |
| gaforever 2008-07-05 ch 1, | abuseWow great start, cant wait to see where this leads. |
| McMackenzie 2008-07-04 ch 3, | abuseI hope they find Thatcher and lock his ass up. Update soon. |
| izzygeorge 2008-07-04 ch 3, | abuseReally cool idea to have Meredith secretly blaming Lexie for the attack. I love this story! And thanks for the plug of my story! You rock! So..as far as what's going to happen, is Thatch going to jail? Does he know what he did? Will Mer ever confront him? I love Izzy's role in this too...I kind of like to use her to shape the story and run everyone else's roles too...She sort of is the one who takes care of everyone...right? |
| izzygeorge 2008-06-21 ch 2, | abuseOkay...so I love the second chapter. I like Izzie's role in it. And i like the ending how you described Lexie as the whole hospital's little sister. I absolutely love it. |
| izzygeorge 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abuseOh my god!! That was totally so similar to the idea that I had for my next story! I love it! You rock! So rather than give you suggestions, I'm going to ask some questions and maybe that will help you figure out where you want to go with this. 1. Will Meredith help Lexi immediately or will it take time? 2. How does Meredith and Lexi's relationship and what Thatcher did affect the other characters? 3. Do they catch Thatcher? Does he know what he did or was it temporary insanity? Was he under the influence of any substances? Is he remorseful? I think you are a PHENOMENAL writer! I love it and would love to read more. I wish I could write it with you I love it so much! -Jess |