I demand a sequal.

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"How about a four letter word for slacker?" his father prompted from the front.

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Honestly, I immediately thought "Dean" xD

Hey :) I just found this story, and I really like it! This is one of my favourite stories out there, because its so well written and because i feel so bad for Sam! Great job :D

ArmedWithMyComputer xxx

All I can say is wow. I just found this story and it was so compelling as all your stories are. I love how you write these characters. You make John seem so real instead of mean and hateful like a lot of writers do. I don't see John that way at all. I see him the way you have written him. Thanks so much.

Being the littlest of my family, knowing that you never get out of that category even when you near your thirties, and being brought up by a father that was a controll freak altough he meant well; I can't forget this line of your story: "...The same wound that flared up every time his family downplayed his interests, ignored his desire to do well in school, failed to recognize what was important to him. ...Nothing had changed. He was still the youngest son that needed to be protected, that needed to fall in line. He just had to be alive so they could both do their jobs. But they still didn't get him, and nothing-not injury or peril-would ever change that." You get thorough me always. You punch a line that is inside my very soul when you write like this? How do you do this? How can you write like this? How can you write so well about these emotions?

DEEAAN! Oh, I love this. I love how guilty and protective of Sam you've written him. Gah, super loved.

Ah, finally I got my pathetic self to review. Don't worry, I'll go back and review the others I've neglected. I made an oath, after all...

I don't know why, but these type of fics are my favorites. I've only recently started to read Supernatural fics and I found I've zeroed in on the Limp!Sam ones. Even more, I found the Limp!TeenageSam ones especially delicious. I feel especiallt bad for Sam because as a lot of us, I'm sure, were trying to get OUT of school, Sam was desperately trying to STAY in school. I don't know if it's because of the normalcy or just love of an education and I would really like to see you make that difference more obvious. Or maybe it's both. Hm...

Well anyhoo, off to chapter two!

So tense! Really well told.

Ok, so I just read this for about the tenth time and I just HAD to tell you how much I love it. The relationship between Sammy and Dean-wonderful, made me go "Aw" every few sentences lol

One of my favorites! Thanks so much fo sharing :)

Aw, poor Sammy. Just trying to be a normal teenager and grow up normally, but unable to. This was very good and realistic. If I had to guess, I'd say this was life for the boys before the show, so well done. ;D

aw! this story is so good! :D I feel bad for Sam tho...but I really like how they all pulled together :)

and the whole alienation/alone thing made me wanna cry! :(

but it's a really good story! I love your stories! they're always so good :D lol...

good job!

This was a most awesome story! Your very detailed descriptions, especially of the feelings of John and the boys rang absolutely true. I might not agree with everything concerning your characterization of Daddy Winchester but for the most part it really strung a cord with me.

The fic itself was unbelievably suspenseful and extremely well-written; honestly, your style is marvellous, and I enjoyed the read from beginning to end!

Excellent work!

Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.

"Dean had always believed him-completely-from the time he was two years old and John told him that milk was nothing more than white soda to make him down it with glee. He'd tried the same trick on Sam, when he'd actually remembered to buy milk, and the two year old had scowled at him and told him flatly that he was wrong."

I can so see that happening, omfg.

This was a great ending to a great fic. I loved that you didn't go the cliche route and have everything end up all happy. The fact that Sam is still alienated makes my heart hurt...but in a good, "in line with canon" sort of way, haha.

I completely loved this. Great job.

I love how you've written John. It's amazing.

And the fight between Dean and John - the open defiance that could only be brought on by Sam being hurt...brilliant.

Awesome job.

Erk, the choking scene scared the crap out of me! It was very brilliantly written - terrifying, but in a way that I couldn't stop reading.

Great job!