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OrianPrime92
2009-06-15 . chapter 2
AWH! Poor Trailbreaker...

-decides something-

I'm gunna write a one-shot for TB! -grins- with a mystery mech! Yep! He needs it...

-starts cursing Mindhaze- Dead or not, that **'s gonna get an asswooping! >3

haha, I love this! Hound and Mirage are ADORABLE together! -fansqueal-
Fence Walker
2009-04-26 . chapter 1
Ooh, I'm intrigued. You have got me hooked on this pairing, and the little Prowl/Jazz thrown in there isn't bad either. You have no idea how hard I tried not to snicker when Prowl offered Hound his cuffs. Who would've thunk it, hm?
Mirage Shinkiro
2009-02-08 . chapter 2
The issue they had to face was quite realistic and well-handled, plus it was so touching to see Mirage trust Hound in the end. Very sweet.
Foxyperv
2009-01-29 . chapter 2
d'aw sweet as it can be X3
Foxyperv
2009-01-29 . chapter 1
lol very funny fic!
btw...what happened between Bluestreak and Smokescreen?
FireFly92
2008-09-14 . chapter 2
YEY! I found a HoundxMirage fic! =D

naggingfishwife
2008-05-24 . chapter 2
I can't even begin to tell you how much I love this story, and all your stories! I guess I'll have to draw a picture instead ^^
Dragowolf
2008-05-24 . chapter 2
LOVE IT! Oh this was good! Hound has earned now not only Mirage's love but his trust! WONDERFUL!

And so well written! I saw this on another website but was unable to review... but now I can!

I LOVE IT! This is such a good pair, and I love how you write them! They are wonderful! LOVE IT!

Please tell me there will be more! Please! You are such a good writter! please more stories! Please!!
ShiTiger
2008-05-23 . chapter 2
Aw... Hound's patience finally paid off. I wonder if they're going to be a bit more romantic in front of the other mechs. Well, Hound would definitely, but Mirage is more likely to blush and get embarrassed.
HitokiriKurisuta
2008-05-22 . chapter 2
Mm~, yummy. :3 Nicely done. If anyone /ever/ tries to tell you that your smut-scenes suck, give them a nice smack upside their head for me, will ya? 'Cause they obviously don't know what they're talking about. ^grins^

Glad to see Hound finally managed to, erm..."talk"? some sense into 'Raj. ^_^
I half expected him to go back and take Prowl up on his offer for a minute, there. XD I think that would've been interesting, heehee. Either way, though, it turned out well. :3

...Hm, mayhaps a branch-off one-shot is needed that includes the handcuffs. X3 Or, ya know, you could show us exactly what happened with Prowl and Jazz's first time. lol Up to you, though. Just letting my fangirly intentions be known. XD

Also, I'd like to see more of Trailbreaker. D8 He needs a happy ending.
TaintedTamer
2008-05-22 . chapter 2
Aw, this was so sweet - damn I love this pairing. :D
flamingmarsh
2008-05-22 . chapter 2
oh this was very good =) I liked it.
blood shifter
2008-05-22 . chapter 2
that was really good. i enjoyed it a lot.
D. Mischief
2008-05-21 . chapter 1
lol oh now this is interesting. I loved how you wrote prowls and Hounds interaction; especially the end part of it.
HitokiriKurisuta
2008-05-20 . chapter 1
^cackles^ I can't /believe/ Prowl did that! ...Wait, no, actually I can. X3
Poor 'Breaker, though... Ah, unrequited love. 'Tis a sad, sad thing.
Poor Hound and Mirage, though, too, while I'm at it, for each of their respective reasons.

Can't wait to see more of this!
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