That was adorable! I love your characterizations. :)

rnt u tried of hearing from me? lol, anywho, it was sweet! it was a very funny beggining.

The ending was fine. You need to have more faith in your writing-it's really good! Meep!

AW, I love the ending, those though two always seem to be interupted!

... oh, Katara.
No.

JK!

I love the contridiction of the story with the title. The detail of the fight was really good, I enjoyed the whole thing!

I say sequel!

I didn't like the ending as much as
the beginning and middle, but it's still as
fantastic as can be. Too bad Avatar episodes
aren't coming out, huh?

Long time no write!

sequal? please? I really like it...mayhem ;)

"Spitting in disgust and pushing herself up on her forearms, she growled and made to kick her feet to get up, when all of a sudden two blades sank into the ground at to her sides and he was crouching over her, hands on either side of her head and body slightly angled away from hers. Sucking in a surprised breath, she stared at him against the backdrop of a darkening sky, taking in his drenched frame, the royal red of his clothing, the brush of his hair against his face, the rawness of his scar. Surprisingly enough, he didn’t seem hostile at all."

... *melts* zomg. I love you Suki, dear. I tried reviewing this forever ago, but ff.nazi would not let me:

*click* "I'm gonna review ~" says wifey.
... "WTH?!?!?! Internal Server Error!!? I HATE YOU FF.NAZI!11!".

And, so, it kind of happened like that - but less dramamtic. I had everything I was going to say too. In any case, this was such a great birthday fic, and, lucky me! Your first contribution to the avaterverse! Now, zutara is not my first choice, of course it's sukka, but I got both. And, gosh darnit, I love both! The bits of sukka/tokka were amazing, Suki! And the Zutara melted my heart so much.

I could not ask for better characterization. You kept so in character that it could have been an episode, if Zutara ever did happen - that was an ending that would surely happen! I mean ... AMAZ!NG ~ Basically, I loveh you.

Yay for wifey. Thanks for the birthday fic (this oneshot demands a sequel or companion fic).

- courtney (fav'd)

tht was an amazing love story! great job!

this was nice.
blissy (:
haha

o, lovely...

great closing line! but i have 2 idiotic questions you're probably going to be hearing a lot:
1.) is there sokka x toph shipping in here?
2.) are you writing a sequel or is this completely one shot? that's okay if it is, i've hard experience where an intended one shot was screamed at to be continued by abid readers and is now on its death bed...

sorry too much info.

anywho, GREAT story, and please continue writing!

Very nice.

i love your story