Brilliant! A wonderful and much-needed look into the life of Kenji, Ikuko and Shingo - the forgotten members of the Tsukino family. I hope you write more small-character stories - you do it beautifully.
That was really well written-and it came as a surprise as well! Kudos to your editor for pointing that out, and more to you for crafting such a beautiful story!
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