great beginning please continuee
-marisa

You must update now! This story is so great! Funny, original, and well-written. Please post more soon!

update andale porfavor! please update soon

okay I'm not confused anymore:) and now... Ranger just shot three guys in front of Steph!! dang! this just keeps getting better and better:)

Now everything makes perfect sense!! I can't wait for more. Please hurry.

There's gonna be more right?! That was one heck of a mean cliffhanger! I'm hooked beyond anything and can't wait for more

this is my review for ch 3 even though it says four
good job, the next chapter makes so much more sense now! ;D i can't wait to see if they actually run into ranger or not, update soon!

dancingpiggy

Oh I can't wait to see where you go with this next. Very Interesting so far.

I am so glad you sent us a chapter!! Please hurry with more.

Oh my God, this was hilarious. I love it! You got Lula and Stephanie both really in character. There's just a few grammar kinks but other than that, it's great =]

And a side, "¿Como está Ranger?" does mean "How is Ranger?" I don't know if that was deliberate or not, but...

oh the drama! great job, loved lula in this chapter, update soon!

dancingpiggy

can't stop laughing! Lula is something else :)

but what was she talking about with the triple murder thing? and how their witnesses?

F.C. This was a terrific update, I can't wait for more. Lula had me laughing my but off!

OMG - You can't leave it like that! I didn't notice you had updated this fic until I popped by and saw it was here. Yay! I love how this is going along, and I love the way you've written in and kept true to Janet Evanovich's style. It's so great.

when will we get more?