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| blader-chick13 2008-08-04 ch 1, | abuseMukuro in a McDonald's uniform was just ... wow xDD |
| shokogoddess11 2008-05-30 ch 2, | abuseLol, this time it was Burger King's Slogan! Great job! ^_^ |
| x juneflower 2008-05-26 ch 2, | abuseholy crap you wrote my two OTPs. !! |
| NegoArgentaeDragotea 2008-05-25 ch 2, | abuseThe last one was hot~ So, are you going to have Hibari with all of the charas? Can't wait to see the next one TO THE EXTREME! |
| kaaate.k 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseyou caught theri personalities pretty well xD hilarious, i must say great work, keep up :D |
| ACSEHA 2008-05-25 ch 2, | abuseHaha, that was so damn good! Is Hibari going to have a fast food harem hm? Hibari~ Kya. He'll gain weight eating all those burgers xD Please update again soon! PS: And for the last oneshot's "19 minutes" at McDonalds, I'm going to say that the kiss actually lasted that long xD Hilarious to imagine two guys making out at the counter, little kids asking "What're they doing, Mommy?" |
| shokogoddess11 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseThat last sentence that Mukuro said was so funny! ^_^ |
| MahouMagi 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseWith great flare Mukuro exclaimed, “Paying up my debt to society!” He look behind Hibari. “Sorry Kyouya, can’t talk with you. You’re holding up my line.”:x Releasing the hold on the bewildered boy, Mukuro quickly counted out change. Placing it on the still-in-shock boy’s hand, he smirked and grinned to the stunned audience watching. “Here at McDonalds, we have things that make you go ‘m’.” Lol, funny |
| ACSEHA 2008-05-19 ch 1, | abuse19 minutes?! How long he was in McDonalds or how long the kiss lasted?! 8D LOL! Perfect fanfic. I'm not really a fan of this pairing, but your summary definitely caught my eyes there! Nice work! |
| Citrus Sunscreen 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuseT^T So cute~ I love it! ^~^ the pairing and your story ^~^ |