That. Was. Gorgeous! ^^

Aw! That was such a sweet ending! I'm so glad she didn't run away or turn Elliot down. Haha..I loved this part:

“Who said anything about sleeping?” She gave him a wink, “After today, we’re not going to be sleeping for a long, long time.”

A very sexy, cute story...Great job!

great story, loved it :)

hot!
can't wait to read more!

Finally! I knew they wouldn't be able to resist each other much longer, lol. I loved it when she flushed the toilet on him, lol. And when he dragged her into the shower and him being naked...she never stood a chance, lol. Great job on this steamy chapter! Keep up the great work!

absolutely love the story! i cannot wait to read more. please update again as soon as possible!

I hope she jumps in the shower with him, but she'll probably flush the toilet while he's in there instead, lol. I loved how he pinned her to the bed and she eventually pushed him off and had a pillow fight..cute scene! Keep up the great work!

love it, can't wait for more

Good stuff so far, but I have a question: since when does olive oil induce vomiting? Maybe you meant to say castor oil? Because that's the oil that makes you vomit (and used to do just that and well as make you have a bowel movement).

I love it when Elliot goes into protective mode. I definitely didn't see the attack coming, but I'm glad they are both ok. Keep up the great work!

Ok, this girl needs to unsimplify her life and pounce on Elliot, lol. Hell I would...no hesitation, lol. Keep up the great work!

I will always be a die hard EO shipper, but this story is cute. I really like the flirting between them in this chapter. Keep up the great work!

Good chapter! I really liked it and can't wait to read the next one.

can't wait for more

Haha! I love this. A drunk Olivia? Priceless!

Great job, please update soon!

EOSVU4eva