Great fic so far I can't wait to read more.

omg! u MUST update i swear if u dont im gonna bring the dogs on u! so update sooon!

TUWEILRNSLDF-9DGBJKL[-EFWG,0E5QF]F4'! OH MY GODMDAMN FUCKING GOD! I FUCKING LOVE THIS FIC! YPLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE CONTINUE!

love to read more AWSOME BTW

good story-this stpry reminds me why I like this pairing...lol now iam going to find more cute Kag/Ses stories!

oh so cool hope you will update soon

Aww. Damn, i wanted to see more of this story. Hopefully you will continue it eventually, and i will be waiting. This is great!

i've saw this story at and loved it. i wanted to see what happened next and all, but saddened by the fact that you discontinued the story. i think you should of continued with it, your a great writer and i enjoy many of your stories. i hate to see this one wasted; i was looking forward to inu's reaction.

'...homicidal, sadistic half-brother...'

XD XD XD

Aren't you making Inuyasha too cold toward Kagome unlike Kikyo? Yet, the depends on when this fic is taking place.

Keep it up!

I am still not sure how I should feel about Sesshoumaru's characterization but that guy should be ice cold -_-'

I love the idea of a mental/emotional bond between the 2 but I am still not sure about Sesshoumaru's enthusiasm to nurture it.

Anyway, I am still reading I am happy _

Thanks!

… Sesshomaru but a more talkative one due to an unusually good mood…. I guess that he is still in character, but I am not sure how I feel about that gesture of kindness when he went so far to allow a human to sit in his lap. But what about if you have let Kagome's POV switch to that of Sesshomaru as soon as she entered the clearing, then come back and forth between the two POV's while continuing the narration of events? Wouldn't that have helped the reader find the character's strange reaction supported by his own thoughts? Wouldn't that have limited the redundancy in narration caused by repeating the same events of Chapter 1 but through Sesshomarus' eyes?

this was excellent keep up the good work and writing.

please write more

lol! this is so awesome! that battle with the naraku-look-a-like was so amazing! i mean, where in the world did u come up with the idea of not only combining her arrow with his dragon strike, but for the power from her arrow to take on the form of a dragon? and the synchronization of there hearts and thoughts and their souls alighning was simply magnificient! and i am glad that i am privilaged to read such an awe-inspiring piece of work! and the convo after the battle and in this chapter? simply amazing. i love how they are increasingly forgetting that they are in the prescence of the others and are showing more and more of themselves to each other despite that their relationship is frowned upon by all her compaions. pls update soon! ur story is giving me hope that maybe, just maybe, ill be able to write this good as well.