to the point. it is perfection.

I can’t believe you don’t have more reviews!! This is awesome!! I totally love this story. Very very very good. Jacob/Bells together is always awesome. but more so in your fic. LOL

nice.
i don't like bella/edward so i chose bella/jacob to be my ship, even if that automatically makes me suck in the fandom. i also love jacob/nessie, though.
great piece of writing!!

What Bella said was kind of funny. "Well, here I am." It's like she's daring him to tell her to go away and see what happens.

This is . . . amazing. You did a wonderful job at describing the relationships between Bella and Jacob and Edward. The line, "how she has come to define herself by his existence" is my favorite, and pretty much reflects what I thought of Bella/Edward. Excellent, excellent job!

It's amazing how, even though I am pretty much a devout Edward/Bella shipper, after I look at your Bella/Jacob fics and pictures, you are able to completely convince me. For a few moments after this fic, I was completely in love with the Bella/Jacob fandom.
You has talent. And lots of it.
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I love it when philosophy and psycology and shipping all collide into one fic of awesome.

Everything is just so perfect. It all just clicks into place. My favourite paragraph is obviously the one that mentions her grandmother (Geeze, Bella, you couldn't have put *that* into your equation at least?).

God I love your twilight stuff. It's all so deep!

This piece is stunningly brillant. It's poetic and yet very real. It's short and simple and yet so deep. I think I'll read it again and again for a while. The end was just... guh. Perfect.

Agh! That is so perfect!

I don't think Edward and Bella are right for each other, but I don't think I could ever put it to words like that. So thank you.

Keep Writing.

YES! YES! THIS IS WHY EDWARD IS NOT MEANT FOR BELLA!

Hahahah, I totally made this point in my humanities class last semester when we talked about beauty, that it's the impermanece of life that makes it so special, so beautiful. I wish all those silly E/B people out there would realize this. Granted being with Jacob would still be slightly dangerous, *points to Emily/Sam* but I still think it'd be better than Edward.

I'M SO EXCITED SOMEONE ELSE SEES THIS!

I love how poetic everything you write is. I have to take the extra time to REALLY read it, and it makes me love your stories all the more.

This was gorgeous. Just gorgeous.

Wow.
That's really good!
I can never pick between Jacob and Edward, because I love them both so much. It really depends on the book. XP
I loved this so much!!=]
Keep up the good work!

ooh wow, that is so deep and so true. i simply adore this, and don't care how short it is. great job, luv~!