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Idolchan
2009-05-30 . chapter 1
D: WOW. That is all I HAVE to say. WOW. YOU ROCK!
Yokai no Miko
2008-07-28 . chapter 1
I'm a little bit confused but you said to read it quickly x.X The end very much confused me... I knew that their birthday was awhile ago and was hoping that you wouldn't let me down by not writing a birthday piece for them xP How're you doing anyway?
KGG
2008-06-19 . chapter 1
Not bad. Until I read it towards the bottom I kept trying to figure out what the note said. Very touching.

As for the pairing, it was the one I liked most in the show myself aswel. Though after "that bomb" got dropped about them being sibilings I was royaly tick off, well to be fair I was stunned, I dont think I moved for like 10 whole minites after her father gave her that picture.

I still read their parring fics from time to time, but nowhere near what I used to. It twas such a shame, Kira needed a girl to keep a fire lit under his rear lol. Till next time Ja Ne.
Polites
2008-05-26 . chapter 1
I enjoyed this. Great to see you back on the creativity circuit. Seeing you back is like that one Coldplay song... 'I used to rule the world ... Now in the morning I sleep alone, sweep the streets I used to own.'

Good luck!
wow
2008-05-23 . chapter 1
By far your best, by far.

took you 20 minutes?

I'd really love to see what you'd do with 20 hours, surely a masterpiece;

Angry hands grip on hard and she yells into the abyss of the night with its sparkling stars and the sparkling cider and the sparkling eyes of shock and disapproval. Too much to drink, she groans the next morning, whatever happened to the cheer for the twins of “Happy Birthday?”

Oh, that’s right; they were caught in the red.


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Another note, under her tote, pick it up, read it fast, a true love letter like the worst of the worst and somehow there’s a shadow around it tempting death she chooses to ignore; words like forever together despite being separated, words like no one can pull us away from one another, we are each other’s half. Word’s like, if you fall, I fall, so let’s fall under the stars into each other, explode into one another and become a shooting star elicit a fading smile into the dim of complacent behavior, meet on the balcony, for there is always a balcony, a quickie and a sharp intake of breath, running hands through hair, scratches on the back, is this lust or love? Or maybe, lust of love?

The latter because of his eyes.


really, you outdone yourself girl!
crookedsmile
2008-05-22 . chapter 1
"Another note, under her tote, pick it up, read it fast, a true love letter like the worst of the worst and somehow there’s a shadow around it tempting death she chooses to ignore; words like forever together despite being separated, words like no one can pull us away from one another, we are each other’s half..."

This is the best among your works...
Believe me :)
pgsmrocks
2008-05-20 . chapter 1
This is exactly what I needed to read to convince me that Gundam Seed fandom isn't dead yet. Thank you for posting it!
Happy Birthday Kira and Cagalli!
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