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Shizuku Tsukishima749
2008-09-06
ch 1,
abuseAH! This was SO SWEET!

Gosh! Actually, Ferb scared me for a second; I thought he was going to go all...EMO on me! I suppose it might just have been that it's innocent, quiet FERB and my innocent, quiet SELF/MIND combining that almost made me run in fear! XD No offense meant! I mean, I finished it and am a happy little reviewer, no? ^_^

Still, goodness! I thought we were never gong to get the Ferb we all loved to come out! Yikes! (wipes sweat off forehead) I can relax, now, though! lol.

AW! Phineas is just SO cute! Is he really younger than Ferb? I like to think of them as the same age, but it could just be the way my mind works. How old DO you think they are...? That's always bothered me, when they don't tell you how old people are in your favorite shows...like, Shane Gray in 'Camp Rock', for instance (for me)...

Anyway, I think this is one of the most inspirational, beautiful, soul-searching stories I've EVER read! If not THE most!! *U* You are truly an artist! PLEASE continue with what you have /are doing here, and I shall remain loyal! ^U^ *U* ^U^ *U* ^U^ *U*
Ever-so sincerely signed,
Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;) :D ;D :) ;) :D ;D :) ;)
collete11
2008-09-06
ch 1, anon.
abusereally good! I want to see another fic from u!
ASoUSM
2008-08-24
ch 1,
abusethat was cool! And I 100% agree with you. Phineas and Ferb rocks!
Nyachu
2008-08-20
ch 1,
abuseOh, wow... I've been thinking about this sort of idea since it first aired, so I'm glad somebody else saw into it too. :) Very believable as far as the way Linda and Lawrence got together, and I really think that would be Ferb's first reaction to the situation. But I love how you bring Ferb's love of building into the picture to click with Phineas' love of designing. You captured that "it-was-meant-to-be" theme, which is even subtly put into the structure of the series. I could picture the whole scene perfectly in my head.

And as a little side note, I just love how you put a little bit of the British "language" into Ferb's dialogue ("let me alone", as an example). Really subtle, but it made all the difference while reading it. ^^
ZetatheDreamer
2008-08-19
ch 1,
abuse*Bursts into tears* *sniff* THAT *blubber* Was..sso.. BEAUTIFUL! WA Sniff.
green ninja93
2008-08-10
ch 1,
abuseHm interesting, don't hear much on Ferb, really intersting to read. I loved it, though I do wonder about Ferb/Phineas thing going on ?
CrazyInSye
2008-07-29
ch 1,
abuseAww I'm glad I stumbled upon this story, how Serendipitous :D
puccalover360
2008-07-07
ch 1,
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Second daughter of Eve
2008-06-23
ch 1,
abuseAH!
This is sweet.
Eve
DarkAngel10003
2008-06-13
ch 1,
abuseThat was simply beautiful!*sniff* I cried a littlexD
NigaleCross
2008-06-04
ch 1,
abuseHow could Ferb not like Phineas? He is so sweet and talkitive. I do like a fic that shows Ferb's inner thoughts since I have always wondered what goes on in his head.
GrayKitty
2008-06-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseI was reading this like, "Oh gosh, Ferb hates Phineas!??"

Then at the end, I was all, "Aww! What a beautiful story!!"

This was AWESOME!! You deserve a crazy cookie :D No words can describe this story...It's just perfect O_O
Zavier Starwood
2008-05-24
ch 1,
abuseI've broken my extended silence to say something that needs to be said to you:

YOu...DO...StuFF...GoOD...*is in shock*

I can't help love this story, especially since it centers on Ferb, my favorite! You rock my socks right out of my Converse!

I'd love to see more Phineas and Ferb stuff from you, but only if that's what you feel like writing.
Pinky Lillix
2008-05-24
ch 1,
abuseI love this.
Experimental Fairimental
2008-05-22
ch 1,
abuseTried to review this the other day, but ffnet wouldn't let me; sorry...

Awesome fic. I love how Ferb tries to deal with everything by keeping himself distanced from Phineas and his family. It's very realistic.

And I totally agree with your opinion of the show! LOL, seems like every time I get into a fandom, one of my fave authors/artists does something for it. XD Call it serendipity, I guess...

~God Bless.
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