Continue please! I love this :)

This was really funny. I can only imagine what crazy scemes jay and bob are going to come up with...

"...so Bob was inwardly thankful that Jay could be a colossal ass". I read that as "Jay has a..." XD

Normally I dislike slash, but somehow your story is fun to read. I just hope it doesn't turn too melodramatic or OOC later. Keep on the good job.

yay. update you must or cry i will. hah yoda speak. anywho i really like it. i love randal/elias slash but there isn't enough. you must update for the love of well um cool ranch doritos which might i add is the greatest snack eva. in the whole wide world eva.

i will read later. i was looking for a randal elias slash fic.

Another great chpt! Only nitpick is some grammar and spelling mistakes, things like 'brake' instead of 'break.' It can be rather jarring in the middle of a sentence. Otherwise, I adore the direction the story is heading and would love to see more to it.

Keep up the great work!

Not one comment! Huh? This is awesome! This is not my favorite pairing in the viewaskew 'verse but damn if this isn't downright adorable. I esp. love your Jay voice, so perfect. I could really hear him as I was reading this. This story deserves more love - its well-written, funny, and in character. Awesome. I am on to read the next chpt!