Hot and nice!

I thought it was pretty good :D

keep writing :)

Liz

Hey Kit Kat!

Wow. This was very captivating and took my breath away when reading it. For someone who has never written Batista and Cena before, you did an awesome job. Don't sell yourself short-I think you portrayed John pretty well. In fact, many people only think he's that tough guy on TV. But I think he has a softer side, just like Dave. It's unfair to assume that they are exactly like their onscreen personas. I think you did a great job portraying them. I certainly couldn't have done that well.

Also, great job with making JBL and Randy mean. I can see them both beating up on Cena like that. And yes, Dave is a jerk, but he isn't that big a jerk. I think he would try to help Cena out.

Loved this, and cannot wait for more!

Love ya

Tina

You didn't potray them good but it was still sweet so I'll ignore it for the moment. I liked it, it was cute.

Once again, a job well done! You did really well to portray the emotions of these two - they aren't the easiest to write about. I think you could probably extend this story if you wanted.

Very cute.

H

xoxo