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| Little Miss Spell-of-the-We... 2006-05-12 ch 1,  | abuseHi, I know you don't know me, but I don't think any bad reviews should stop you. I think that your story, though it might need some speech marks is very interesting, anyway please continue. Bye. |
| foxxxxx44 2006-02-04 ch 1, | abuseIT SUCKS, I HATE IT. |
| sarah 2004-09-29 ch 1, anon. | abusek its pretty good but where is your punctuation?? |
| Turtle's Chopsticks 2004-09-23 ch 1, | abuseThis isn't a flame. You should write more. your story is realy good. I like to bash snape its fun. especialy when he runs.lol. your story is a credit to draco/hermione storys evey where. considering that you gave people a fair warning on the snape bashing thing any one who disaproves is at fault for reading it. |
| A Person of Randomness 2004-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat did poor Snape do to deserve this? He's probably crying his heart out in his office right now. |
| A Person of Randomness 2004-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat did poor Snape do to deserve this? He's probably crying his heart out in his office right now. |
| Next to Something 2004-03-21 ch 1, | abuseOk well, I like the plot, but its very hard to read. Run ons and spelling mistakes and hehe's and haha's make it very difficult to see what you are writting. Quotation marks would be good, as would periods and other punctuation marks. I don't want to say that this story is bad, because it isn't, but I am having a hard time reading it and understanding what is going on. |
| ruby+sapphire 2004-03-14 ch 1, | abusethat was great. definately right more, definately! |
| ProwlingKitKat 2004-03-06 ch 1, | abuseYou have horrible spelling, hideous grammar, and atrocious punctuation. Your thought's were unoriginal and cliche. You had no detail and a writing style that is so offensive to my eyes, it makes me wish I were blind. Other than that, great story! |
| Annie 2004-02-04 ch 1, anon. | abusehay,once more...me!yayayayayay!right...back to the review:D i like this fic alot also:D and i do hope that you update this one or that you keep on with your other one:Dtill next time:D...Annie |
| arallahmenorah 2004-01-27 ch 1, | abuseInteresting, but you have to write more! I like the story, the only advice I have is to use "" when people talk, that is unless you plan to write it in the form of a script. Capitalize your letters, but other than that you have a great story! I like how you actually described hermione. Most people don't do that. They normally expect her to look the same, but she wouldn't! I mean people do change after a year or two! Anywho, update soon! ~arallahmenorah~ |
| Theresa 2004-01-02 ch 1, anon. | abusePLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE ! write more! ! ! ^_^ (. .) _ -Theresa |
| alysha 2003-10-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseits great! but y did u delete the flames?... thats what makes it more exiting! |
| vanityANDgreed 2003-07-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was real good keep going PWEAZE! |
| Society of Sticks and Stone... 2003-07-11 ch 1, | abusedont listen to tha flamers, write more i'm curious to know wat turns out with draco and hermione |