 Dani Jones 2009-10-26 . chapter 14I LOVED this chapter. I felt his anxiety! Victoria's never going to leave him alone about the girl...this'll be great! Take your time, and make it fantastic! |
 Dani Jones 2009-10-26 . chapter 1Great beginning! I envy people who can stick with the beginning details! Love the argument with the gender of the child! It's so interesting to see the different faces of Cutler Beckett. You had me blushing for a few moments there... |
 SensiblyScrewy 2009-07-18 . chapter 14A girl. So TOTALLY knew it! |
 Giselle Mariana LeRoux 2009-07-17 . chapter 14wonderful! absolutely amazing. You wrote Jack perfectly. He was so funny! And I'm happy to see Helena healthy and Beckett wrong! LOL. Can't wait to read more.
~Bri |
 Leila Data 2009-07-16 . chapter 14Haha, I loved seeing Jack's crew! And it's great that Victoria was right about the baby being a girl, lol. I love this story! XD |
 flyingporridge 2009-07-15 . chapter 14 Thank you for updating, I love your work. |
 You cant rush science. 2009-07-13 . chapter 14Great chapter cant wait for more. |
 Rosetta Penn 2009-07-11 . chapter 14I am SO happy you've continued this! I noticed you updated the last chapter a bit ago but I never got around to reading it till now. I absolutely love love love that Jack's has made an appearance, and it looks like he's here to stay! For a little while anyway. You write he perfectly! It's so witty, I don't know how you come up wit this stuff. And Victoria had her baby! I knew it would be a girl! Helena is a beautiful name, it sound so lovely next to Beckett..hm, Helena Beckett. I swear that last line almost gave me shivers for some reason. |
 You cant rush science. 2009-07-10 . chapter 13Great chapter cant wait for more. |
 flyingporridge 2009-06-30 . chapter 13 Yay, an update. I'm so overjoyed. |
 Giselle Mariana LeRoux 2009-06-30 . chapter 13an outstading chapter. Wonderful edition to the story. Can't wait to read more!
~Bri |
 Leila Data 2009-06-28 . chapter 13Captain Jack Sparrow saving Mercer? And Cat a prisoner? And Tori's baby? So much happening in this chapter! I was so excited to see an update on this story, and I love it! I can't wait to find out what's going to happen with all of it. Superb work, as always. :) |
 SensiblyScrewy 2009-06-28 . chapter 13It's alive! We missed you! But now you're back, so everything's well again. Cutler's actually seeming... dare I say panicky. Men always seem to go weak in the knees at the thought of a human being coming out of a woman's.. well, you know. Apparently, Beckett's no exception! Thanks for the update! Give us another one, eh? ;)_ |
 Cupcakes and Tea 2009-06-28 . chapter 13Yay! A new chapter! The scene between Cutler and Victoria was quite amusing! Please update soon, I enjoy reading this story! |
 FreddyJason27 2009-05-20 . chapter 12I love this! Is there more?! *_* |